(03) Masquerade

Oct 27, 2012 00:16


Title: The Singer Meets The KidPairing: Kyusung, Eunhae, YeHyuk
Genre: drama, tragedy
Summary: Yesung's whole life, he's worn a mask. Will this eventually crumble due to stress or will he finally be free of it as he remove it compliantly? Sequel to  The Lost Child
Rating: PG-13 for abuse
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fic: masquerade

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junnosukex3 October 26 2012, 20:43:50 UTC
JongWoon is soooooooooooo cute ♥ Of course Yesung must be his second daddy !

I hope Hae will change his mind soon ^^

Thanks !

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nytslyer03 October 27 2012, 15:11:41 UTC
Jongwoon is forever cute. for me that is. :3

sorry for the extremely late reply. and thank you for reading and commenting. :)

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regig October 27 2012, 00:22:39 UTC
Awwww the little Jongwoon is so compassionate, already loves yeye. It's a shame he is still worried that his dad can leave him?
what's about Hae, is he jealous? It would be interesting, even if is it just for a moment.

sorry for the horrible grammar and thanks for the early update!!!!!

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nytslyer03 October 27 2012, 15:16:10 UTC
little Jongwoon isn't afraid that his dad would leave him. he's afraid that the man would hate him. hehehe.

about the Hae questions... sorry, i can't answer that. ;)
thank you for commenting and reading. Your grammar isn't horrible by the way.

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littlemenomaru October 27 2012, 00:46:27 UTC
Ron! *Throws Love* Is that enough?^^

Seriously Jongwoonie is like the cutest kid ever. Just taking Yesung in to sleep in his bed and even kissing him again...twice.....

And for someone who shouldn't be speaking, he spoke a lot this chapter haha.

Though um, how does no one notice that he's missing earlier?

And Donghae...geez what's his problem? He could try a little before casting Yesung aside.

Good luck with 5

^^♥

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nytslyer03 October 27 2012, 15:17:34 UTC
*catches love*
YAH! THIS ISN'T ENOUGH! I NEED MORE!

lol. i loved how i interpreted Jongwoon as a cute little kid in TLC so, i want to bring back that same adorableness. :D
yeah, i need all the luck i could get with 5!

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littlemenomaru October 27 2012, 17:20:03 UTC
Don't get greedy on me now. I sent lots of love...can't give up too much more.

Don't we all need luck right now. I need luck to write just about anything right now...darn writer's block.

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rhenny October 27 2012, 02:59:53 UTC
*collects love and will give it to you on the 30th :DD ( ... )

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nytslyer03 October 27 2012, 15:21:10 UTC
uhm.... long comment is long.

i won't be bringing my awesome camera on the 30th because I have class at 3 in the afternoon then. :) or maybe i could skip? oh well. anyways, I missed this long comment! *sobs* nobody gives them anymore and I feel sad.

Thank you for the opinion you gave me. The questions were all helpful to me in making the plot more interesting. Baby Jongwoon is still cute though he's already 6 right? aww~

I'll try and make the masquerade part a little more interesting. thank you for reading and commenting on both AFF and here.

do text me the details the day before. :)

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charismavi October 27 2012, 04:10:57 UTC
aaaawwww..soooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuutee...
Seriously, Jongwoon was like the most adorable, kind hearted creature on earth..He just took Yesung in and let him slept on his bed..he just liked to give Yesung kisses didn't he? :D
What exactly was it that make Donghae give Yesung a cold shoulder? Jealousy? Or he just over protective to his beloved?
:DD Kyuhyun freaked out at the beginning, when Jongwoon told him he took someone in, and just launched himself at Yesung :DD The group hug was like the best..Yesung felt accepted :D
Waiting for the next chap Ron :D

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nytslyer03 October 27 2012, 15:22:53 UTC
hey!
I wish all kids are like that. *sigh* he's like an angel, don't you think?

the donghae questions won't be answered as of now. sorry. :3

I'll try my best to write Chapter 5 as fast as I could. :)

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