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[fic] if i could, i want to say it one more time. - part 1

Jun 08, 2009 03:04

TITLE: if i could, i want to say it one more time...
AUTHOR: o0yani0o
PAIRING: Yunho x Jaejoong
GENRE: super angst
LENGTH: 1/?
SUMMARY: Jaejoong only wanted Yunho to listen to him, to believe in him, to trust him... and to love him. Is that too much to ask?
INSPIRED BY: stand by u - thsk

( Jaejoong clearly remembers all. Everything. Except Yunho. )

length: parts, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, genre: drama, genre: angst, user: o0yani0o

Comments 52

mini2ujsu June 7 2009, 19:42:06 UTC

Poor Yunho...forgotten!
But Jaejoong happy with Yoochun...
Seems Yunho learned his lesson too late...

Great build up, looking forward to PART 2

o0kamiyani0o June 8 2009, 06:04:19 UTC

thank you! i am worried it's too short and not as detailed as how i normally do with my other fics. = . = more on part 2! XD thank you!

jaegiya June 7 2009, 19:45:49 UTC

o0kamiyani0o June 8 2009, 06:04:54 UTC

*pats you*

enhikari June 7 2009, 20:10:25 UTC

Jaejoong forgot Yunho? q0qV Buhu.. q___q

Waiting for Part 2~ q0q

o0kamiyani0o June 8 2009, 06:06:11 UTC

yes. he did forget Yunho. T_T hehe

jangwoohyuk35 June 7 2009, 20:20:02 UTC

Oh no!! Jae forgot Yunho? :(

This is really good...can't wait for Part 2 <3

o0kamiyani0o June 8 2009, 06:06:29 UTC

thank you!
i will work hard on the next parts. xD

dysreflexic June 7 2009, 20:20:48 UTC

yunho's mistake was indeed unintentional and out of his stupidity
and he was well rewarded for it...
--- jaejoong experiencing amnesia. making it worst, the only thing he forget was yunho
--- jaejoong thinks they're only close friends...
and was asked to be his best man
fate really played it's part..
a REALLY HARD SLAP on HIS FACE...

can't wait for the next chapter..

o0kamiyani0o June 8 2009, 06:07:05 UTC

lol! that's a detailed comment you have there. xD yes! there is more! xd