Chapter 15 - Unrevealed Catharsis.

Jan 10, 2010 22:53



The sharp tang of salt and brine settled thickly at the base of his tongue, stinging his sensitive nose as a light breeze weaved through the air. It ruffled his locks, tipping wispy strands to whip chaotically across his face, the merest whispering brush against his wind roughened cheeks. He felt the gritty surface of the rocks bite into his palm, ( Read more... )

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obsidianinks January 10 2010, 14:58:08 UTC
huhu~! spot! for ekin_hardy, ting5 and succexytop..

im so glad i managed to finish this before school starts tomo.. OMGAWD~ i feel like stabbing myself.. but anyways, hehe, my whining aside, i hope you guys like this exciting chapter and the sprinkled joy of yoosu love *jumps around*

im sorry about the shortness of this chapter, if i wasnt rushing i would have written more, but never mind, im quite contented with this so far.. (^_^) i hope to see your loving comments after slogging 10 hours in school tomo.. :(

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ekin_hardy January 10 2010, 19:45:00 UTC
omg..omg...omg...u ebil women~~~~!!!!

how can u leave us hanging like that,,,its my Su crying there....owhh...n its something to do with yoochun,,,owh..wth...i cant sleep now....

omg...omg...omg....

Yoochun an ex-mob leader,, i bet Susu's the reason he stopped being one....

omg...omg...omg...

now i wanna read ur prequel to tis story....omgomg...

honey, u r better than Stephenie Meyer...like seriously,, ur story make my mind go WOW~~!!!

P/S:Good luck with school dear~~!!!

owh,,,n has yunjae dated yet...seems like it to me...

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obsidianinks January 11 2010, 08:44:33 UTC
woah woah thats alot of O.M.G's going on there.. hee, yoochun used to be a leader of a gang, yes you got that right. ding. susu's the reason he stopped being one... kinda, so ding! and me being better than stephenie meyer? diii-- dang! ^^ nah~ you flatter me... seriously. you do. i feel embarressed.. huhu~ *sheepish wave* but ive got a long ways to go before i ever reach best selling stage.

owh. yeah. yunjae love is progressing~! ^^ however i feel kinda guilty since they used to be my first love, but now i dont think i cant write another yunjae fanfic.. i think it'll all be about susu now.. damn you and your dolphin.. im converted.. :D

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ekin_hardy January 11 2010, 12:59:53 UTC
actually to b honest dear~~ stephanie meyer is such a great writer~~~too corny for my taste...

i converted you? hahaha...i'm the xiahnism and yoosuism priest...

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obsidianinks January 10 2010, 15:01:43 UTC
spot for youinmyjumpsuit, gu2duck, jeshara and dilovesyunjae.. ^^ i just wanna say thks you guys for sticking by this story for so long.. ill be gone for quite some time as school picks up and im not sure when ill be able to post the next chapter.. it'll be a long hiatus im afraid. *bows*

but i just hope you will be content with this last chapter for awhile~ (^_^)

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obsidianinks January 10 2010, 19:02:22 UTC
hee~ no problem.. im supposed to be sleeping now but causse my sleeping cycle has changed during the holidays, ive been tossing and turning for 2 hours on my bed. im gonna get hell tomo but i guess ill comment now~ ^^

im really sorry that i always leave things at cliffhangers, hehe.. but ill always explain later in the next chapter so just have to be kept in suspense for some time :) i remember that i mentioned jae's sis once in an earlier chap, when jae was visiting the poor families with yunho.. so yeah, you could go and check :D

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yoosusarang January 10 2010, 17:19:34 UTC
first time commenting!!!!
what's wrong with junsu? why is he upset by what chunnie said? is there something we don't know about our susu's past?

i really love this fic and you are such a good writer! keep it up! hwaiting! ^_^

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obsidianinks January 10 2010, 19:11:42 UTC
oh yay~!! new reader!! *glomps* thks for reading dearie~

lol at 'whats wrong with junsu?' im sorry, you may not understand whats so funny, my humor is abit cracked up at 3 in the morn and im trying desperately to go to sleep, but my eyes just wont close..

susu and yoochuns's past will be explained in the next chapter, so no worries. i just like tormenting ppl with cliffhangers, ehehe... *gets slapped*

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munkymandee January 10 2010, 17:54:36 UTC
omg i've been waiting the whole day and at 2am when i wanna sleep i see this! :O nooooo brb in 8 hours :D

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obsidianinks January 10 2010, 19:08:41 UTC
-_-" why you wake up at 10, so late huh? huh!? i have freaking school and i gotta wake up in 3 hrs time.. should i even go to sleep~?? oh btw, i just updated my blog, go see!! ^^

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munkymandee January 11 2010, 02:53:35 UTC
omgg omg!!! yoochun's a mafia boss?? that SO fits him! lol. gangpyo's a nice name. but why is junsu so sad D: and the kitty's so cute. mannnn update soon :)

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obsidianinks January 11 2010, 08:46:58 UTC
lolz, im using my school com right now.. the keyboard is nice~~~ so old, and clicky... *err* yeah, anyways. lol, junsu's sadness will be revealed!! which will unveil a part of yoosu's past.. hee, the kitty is modeled after my cat, to be the complete opposite.. thats why you like yozo~

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junsu_luvr January 10 2010, 18:24:54 UTC
ooh~ :o What's up with Su?
The beginning was really sweet though. I love how Yunjae's relationship is growing.
Can't wait for the next update! ^^

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obsidianinks January 10 2010, 19:10:40 UTC
yay for yunjae love! hee~ <3

ahhh, susu's weird reaction will be explained in due time in the next chapter, i just live dishing out cliffhangers.. ehehe *gets slapped*

thks for reading btw, i dont think ive seen you comment before.. so yay~!! new reader *jumps around* here, for all new readers *huggles*

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