The sharp tang of salt and brine settled thickly at the base of his tongue, stinging his sensitive nose as a light breeze weaved through the air. It ruffled his locks, tipping wispy strands to whip chaotically across his face, the merest whispering brush against his wind roughened cheeks. He felt the gritty surface of the rocks bite into his palm,
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im so glad i managed to finish this before school starts tomo.. OMGAWD~ i feel like stabbing myself.. but anyways, hehe, my whining aside, i hope you guys like this exciting chapter and the sprinkled joy of yoosu love *jumps around*
im sorry about the shortness of this chapter, if i wasnt rushing i would have written more, but never mind, im quite contented with this so far.. (^_^) i hope to see your loving comments after slogging 10 hours in school tomo.. :(
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how can u leave us hanging like that,,,its my Su crying there....owhh...n its something to do with yoochun,,,owh..wth...i cant sleep now....
omg...omg...omg....
Yoochun an ex-mob leader,, i bet Susu's the reason he stopped being one....
omg...omg...omg...
now i wanna read ur prequel to tis story....omgomg...
honey, u r better than Stephenie Meyer...like seriously,, ur story make my mind go WOW~~!!!
P/S:Good luck with school dear~~!!!
owh,,,n has yunjae dated yet...seems like it to me...
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owh. yeah. yunjae love is progressing~! ^^ however i feel kinda guilty since they used to be my first love, but now i dont think i cant write another yunjae fanfic.. i think it'll all be about susu now.. damn you and your dolphin.. im converted.. :D
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i converted you? hahaha...i'm the xiahnism and yoosuism priest...
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but i just hope you will be content with this last chapter for awhile~ (^_^)
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im really sorry that i always leave things at cliffhangers, hehe.. but ill always explain later in the next chapter so just have to be kept in suspense for some time :) i remember that i mentioned jae's sis once in an earlier chap, when jae was visiting the poor families with yunho.. so yeah, you could go and check :D
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what's wrong with junsu? why is he upset by what chunnie said? is there something we don't know about our susu's past?
i really love this fic and you are such a good writer! keep it up! hwaiting! ^_^
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lol at 'whats wrong with junsu?' im sorry, you may not understand whats so funny, my humor is abit cracked up at 3 in the morn and im trying desperately to go to sleep, but my eyes just wont close..
susu and yoochuns's past will be explained in the next chapter, so no worries. i just like tormenting ppl with cliffhangers, ehehe... *gets slapped*
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The beginning was really sweet though. I love how Yunjae's relationship is growing.
Can't wait for the next update! ^^
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ahhh, susu's weird reaction will be explained in due time in the next chapter, i just live dishing out cliffhangers.. ehehe *gets slapped*
thks for reading btw, i dont think ive seen you comment before.. so yay~!! new reader *jumps around* here, for all new readers *huggles*
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