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obsidianinks

Chapter 16 - A lightning before death.

Jan 16, 2010 23:34

“No, no, no.” Junsu whispered brokenly, a single lone dewdrop slipping free of its crystal chasm to peel past his curled lashes, trembling down a slightly quavering cheek with each shallow, heaving breath. He bit down harshly upon his bottom lip, stifling the unbidden tremors that clawed through his thin frame, wracking his hunched shoulders, his ( Read more... )

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obsidianinks January 16 2010, 15:41:45 UTC

SPOT~! (^_^) for ekin_hardy, Ting5 and succexytop~

*pumps hand* yayyyyy! i did it!! i finished it!! i wasted precious time to finish this over the weekend, but i think its worth it and i cant just let you guys wait for long can i?? ^^ i hope to see many many loving comments!!*wags finger* hehehe, nah joking.. now i have to go finish my mountain of homework.. *sigh*

im quite happy with this chapter for some weird reason.. i just love the yunjae moment i think, and jaes inability to express his emotions in front of others except yunho... *aww* anyways, i hope you guys like it!! :)

ekin_hardy January 16 2010, 22:05:43 UTC

yup,yup me likes it mel~~~

the yunjae melts my frustration with yoosu away....its sooo sweet with yunjae...

but my yoosu...u make me hungry for nxt chappie...why junsu reacts like that...

and jj's gone? dont tell me he's on a solo mission to save his sis....

and gudluck with ur homework dear...hwaiting!!!!

om...its 6.04am...u r supposed to b awake while i'm just abut to sleep...wat happen to my normal sleeping time again?*sigh*

obsidianinks January 18 2010, 03:20:15 UTC

hee~! yunjae.. *skips around*

yoosu?? heheh sorry, sorry, ill make it up to you in the next chapter with a very BIG lengthy section of the story on the both of them.. ^^

jaes on a... #### ^^ cant reveal yet.. *gets bricked*

OMG, 6?? dam, i went to bed around 2.. even with drinking two cups of coffee.. o.O YOU ARE STRONG~~

ting5 January 18 2010, 01:04:05 UTC

I'm so late ne *bows in apology*

sweet YunJae they are getting closer and closer and closer do they even realise d it :D

Oh my Jae's gone...did he went alone to save his sis, aish Yunho-ah pls go after him..

Ohhh Yoosu, me cant wait to read abt Yoosu, why Su reacted as he did and all..

P.S. gd luck with homeworks *hug for encouragement*

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obsidianinks January 16 2010, 15:44:17 UTC

spot for youinmyjumpsuit, gu2duck, jeshara and dilovesyunjae ^^ i hope you guys didnt wait too long~ i just havent had time at all with school starting again.. and i have a whole week of tests next week... *screams* you'll prob see me exhausted next week, lol.. anyways, i hope you guys like this chapter!! and sorry for the cliffhanger, heheh * slaps self*

youinmyjumpsuit January 17 2010, 02:36:21 UTC

oh my gosh i get a spot!! <3333
soo excited about your update cause i know you're busy with school! fighting! :D :D

gosh. junsu and jaejoong are gone?! o_O you can't just leave your loves looking aimlessly for you! ;) it looks like jaesu are going to try and save jae's sister by themselves. come on guys, why can't you take your lovely boys? :P

the yunjae progress is sooo heartwarming. :) i'm glad you're not rushing them. :D seems like they're really breaking walls and melding into each other's souls :D

obsidianinks January 17 2010, 02:40:07 UTC

heeee~ of course you get a spot dearie~ yes, schools been a killer, but since its my second year, im more or less used to the routine..

ku~ jaesu like to lead their boys on lost missions... naughty naughty.. oh, but no, jaesu aint gonna save jae's sis.. junsu disappeared somewhere else..

huhu~ yunjae love *hearts*

kattan69 January 16 2010, 16:08:33 UTC

Oh..oh..now both boys are gone. Wonder how Chun and Yunho are going to find and get them back safely. Luckily these two got the advantage...both are vampires.

obsidianinks January 17 2010, 02:36:27 UTC

^^ yeah, vampires are powerful~

dilovesyunjae January 16 2010, 16:18:43 UTC

aish..where'd jae run off to? tsk. I love how jae can only express himself in front of yun....more yunjae please...:)

obsidianinks January 17 2010, 02:35:05 UTC

^^ okie dokie~ *dishing yunjae moments*

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obsidianinks January 17 2010, 02:34:04 UTC

heeee~ yunjae is slow~ but they're getting there... ah yes, yunho almost went there, but im abit hesitant about writing smut in the story yet.. i mean, we should save it and write it at the climax of the story right? (no pun intended) lol

kuku~! IM SORRY!! *bows* ill try not to leave you hanging so much anymore, hehe, and thks.. ill give my all in the tests! ^^