Chapter 18 - The plummeting journey to meet his maker.

[obsidianinks]

The room was densely quiet, save for a musical tinkling bell that chirruped cheerily with each frisky jump. A feathery ball reduced to ripped mulch was flung haphazardly across his vision- a streaking blur of garishly dyed colours- before a swift flick of a black paw pinned the miserable toy to the ground, a single curved claw sinking menacingly

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[obsidianinks]

SPOT~! for ting5, ekin_hardy and succexytop... (^_^)

phewww~! i finished it!! *proud* i finally have the chance to complete it since school has ended today on a glorious day called 'friday'. hee, so i hope you guys enjoy this. BUT DONT KILL ME~~~!!!! im sorry for making this happen to jae, but i dont think i could have done otherwise.. *puts away your knives* hehehe, HELP MEEEE JUNSU~~~!! *runs away*

[ting5]

OMG TT_TT Jae!!!!!!!!

Why?????????

Where in the heaven's name is Yunho?!?!?!?!

I....oh my...I can't believe that really happened..I wont kill you dear but promise me Leeteuk will die a horrible death!

[obsidianinks]

lol at your whyyyyyy

yay~~ you wont kill me!! (^_^) lol, I PROMISE leeteuk will die a horrible death.. im just figuring out how many different ways he can die and putting them all together.. hmmm... *morbid thoughts*

yunho will come, no worries...

[ting5]

Oooh that sounds something to be looking forward to..all I know is he shouldnt die so easily *evil grin*

I'll be waiting ^^

[obsidianinks]

spot for youinmyjumpsuit, gu2duck, jeshara and dilovesyunjae ^^

IM BACK FROM MY TWO WEES HIATUS!!! DID YA GUYS MISS ME...?? ehehehe.. first, please dont kill meee... im sorry for doing this to jae as well.. but he kinda has to go through this?? and sorry for the cliffys, he- hehe- he.now, now.. *takes away your knives*

well, i hope you enjoyed this chapter!! and please check out the character bios, cause the pictures are pretty~ (^_^) *scampers off*

[youinmyjumpsuit]

OMG i was going aawww yozo's so adorable imagining him playing with that ball.

BUT- O_O

lee teuk how can you take what's yunho's?! oh please, save the young man. i just feel like.. jae what were you thinking??? barging in and having no idea what you got yourself into!

[obsidianinks]

hehehe ah wells... jaes kinda dumb that way... he doesnt wanna get the others into trouble and possibly hurt in the process, so he decided to be the hero... no pun intended.. lool

[munkymandee]

OMG YOU MADE LEETEUKKIE EVIL?? *grabs knives and throws back* noooooo!! and omg yunhooooo save jaejaeee T.T (when i read taeyeon and leeteuk i LOLED-so random XD) yozo's getting sho cute :) get a pic leh! :D WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPPIE where yunho will fly in to the rescue~<3

[obsidianinks]

lol well his laughs and smiles in real life are kinda creepy.. oh well, i dont dislike him, but i dont necessarily like him as well..

lol, leeteuk and taeyeon.. i considered making fictional characters but then it was too troublesome..

FINE! I FOUND PICS OF YOZO!!! *RAWR* three pics to be exact.. go see the character profile.. *mutters*

[wilim]

T_________________________T WHY??????????????

[obsidianinks]

lol new reader?? or silent.. until now that is.. hahaha, no matter, im just happy you like the story so far.. (^_^)

heheheh, please dont kill me, yunho will come..

[wilim]

I was silent for awhile until I finally gave in and decided to have an account. Just so I could read and comment. Haha.
I've been reading yours for quite some time, and I have to say, I really enjoy your story because of how you go through it. I feel like I'm reading some novel, although I don't have that much experience in reading novels. Lol.

Anyway, I just love everything about your story (except maybe the rape part? it seriously made me sad and incoherent, evidently, refer to previous comment. haha, but I guess that's an essential part of your storyline and how it will affect yunjae, just a guess, lol), especially how you portray each character and how unique they are, I like it very much!!
Sooooooo, yes, I LIKE your story. :D and am anticipating your next chapter. That's my way of begging: pls update soon? haha.

[obsidianinks]

haha im glad you like the story so far, and im happy that each character seems extremely unique and special, which means ive achieved one of my goals.. hee~ (^_^)

lol you guessed right, this incident will only bring both of them closer.. ill try to update soon, but schoolwork is starting to pile up and i might be gone for some time.. but i think a two week hiatus is the most.. i wont stretch it any further.. :)

[hoshi14]

Oh no! Yunho where are you? I hope they find Jaejoong quick!

[obsidianinks]

^^ yunho will come, i promise..