Chapter 20 - A spiralling descent along seething tears.

[obsidianinks]

Hongki had never regarded himself as truly outstanding nor exceptionable. He was never really that good at sports, or was he the top scorer in the class. Heck, he wasn’t even popular during school, only existing as another nameless, callous youth that sauntered down the choked hallways of his neighbourhood school. He had never been awarded for

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[obsidianinks]

spot~! for ekin_hardy, ting5 and succexytop! (^_^)

*cries* i kinda feel like this is a resounding fail.. *smacks self* i feel so tired now, and this chapter feels kinda confusing and convoluted! i feel frustrated with this chapter! gah! *bows* im sorry for the fail..

[ekin_hardy]

Owh gawd~~!!!! U updated^^

*attacks this*

[ekin_hardy]

I'm glad Jae cried in this...
I felt relieved that Yunho managed to bring Jae to bring out his pain...
and I'm just happy Yunho was there...<3

did I somehow inspire this cying scene after wat I told you this afternoon bout me crying over Fly To The Sky? XD

but may i ask,, will HongKi play any important part after this....?

anyhow bb,, I hope you have completed all your homework by the time you read this...*Hwaiting*

p/s: I'm still not over your Jaesu..Its like I'm having a post-drunk syndrom over them..*blame u while grinning evilly* ---> a hint for Jaesu..hehe

[obsidianinks]

chu~ <3 ahhh! *screams at spider on wall* eww, jumping spider! *swat*

lol, ok, anyways.. yeah jae needs to realise that he cant keep looking out for everyone.. he needs to take care of himself..

ehehe, unfortunately hongki will not be playing any further parts in the story.. he just has to concentrate on taking care of taeyeon now..

*smacks self* NOOOO~ i havent completed any homework.. was too tired yesterday and was trying to finish this..

(^_^) jaesu~ *throws confetti* <3 heeee~ jaesu is like a drug.. im sorry yoosu *bows*

[obsidianinks]

spot for youinmyjumpsuit, gu2duck, jeshara, dilovesyunjae, hoshi14 and willim! cause you know, i just love you guys *glomps you and hands out heart shaped cookies*

im sorry, i feel like i failed with this chapter!! *stabs self*

[wilim]

ooooh!!! so that's wat the "spot" means! i never rly got it til now (im new in the whole comentng thng lol). anyway, i promis a better coment cus im using a PSP yet again *facepalmself*. using ths is hard it's not even funny O_o but that's jus how excitd i am to read ths update. jus so uknow, i enjoyd ths one. wil tell why later on. =D

[obsidianinks]

ahahaha, no worries, i tried going on the internet once using my psp and the whole setting up process already took like 5 mins... and 70% of it composed of just typing the address.. -_-* so i get what you mean, lol.

im glad you enjoyed it! :)

[hoshi14]

I like the way you have Yunho struggling with staying in control physically and Jaejoong struggling with emotional control. Also, how Jaejoong is behind Yunho's ability to stay under control and in contrast Yunho helps Jaejoong realize that he does not have to retain control over his emotions and can let them out.

*bites* yummy cookies (:

[obsidianinks]

yayyyy... but maybe you should reply under my saved spot for you~ or else my efforts will be for naught~

[munkymandee]

no fail!!!! total win! the yunjae was so sweeetttt and sad T.T and with yunho there now jaejae will be alright ^^ hehehe this chappie was really long! jae is too nice. but not to himself. not enough :(

[obsidianinks]

hehe, pohun says hi and she wants to slap you.. dont ask me why..

yayy, i win! i think.. (-_-)*

i cant really concentrate with cheepoh giggling into my ears but jae is really stupid, not nice, ehehehe *hides from jae fans* i love him really i do, but he has to learn to care about himself sometimes..

[munkymandee]

on teh phone or online? I KICK HER DAMN ASS HAHA yes jae is stupid ok :D PABO.

[obsidianinks]

lol on the phone a moment ago, but shes coming online now so you can kick her ass there.. lool

[kattan69]

Poor Jae!...I really hope he would 'open up' to Yunho and be selfish to take what Yunho can offer...and find happiness for both of them.

[obsidianinks]

soon~ very soon jae will realise that and then happily ever after.. but then, that means end of fic.. *cries*

*evil grin* ill try to prolong it and give you guys some smut scenes. ehehe~