I Dance In Place and Paint My Face and Act Like I Belong Here / Week 2

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Felix stood in front of the mirror and winced. He'd spent the last week eating little more than water and cabbage, but his body appeared to be stubbornly unaffected. Even the special compression body stocking his mother had purchased did little to mask the sheer mass of his body. Now he not only resembled some grotesque mutant sausage, but he felt

Comments

[jenny_evergreen]

Definitely engaging...just don't be too predictable when you keep going! (And keep going!) :)

[kandigurl]

Really enjoyed this! I love the detail we get about Felix and Monifa, hopefully they'll be happier where they're going.

[mezzogiorno]

Very good. You did very well in easing in to the tension, letting us try to decide what is actually going on before showing us. I'm also pleased you don't tell us what happens :)

[myrna_bird]

I hope future prompts allow you to continue these characters. I really like your fiction!

[jem0000000]

How intriguing; I wonder what will happen to them?