I Dance In Place and Paint My Face and Act Like I Belong Here / Week 2

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Felix stood in front of the mirror and winced. He'd spent the last week eating little more than water and cabbage, but his body appeared to be stubbornly unaffected. Even the special compression body stocking his mother had purchased did little to mask the sheer mass of his body. Now he not only resembled some grotesque mutant sausage, but he felt

Comments

[witches]

I LOVED this so much. I've always been interested in 'disappeared' stories too, (mainly because I'm fascinated by the unknown), and this is great! And very cleverly written imo.

[ohelectricshock]

Oh this was so intriguing! I loved your take on the topic.

[tatdatcm]

I really liked your take on the prompt. I want to know what happens to Felix and Monifa and how The Saviors help them. I also think you've left a door here that could swing dark - in a "careful what you wish for" way, or end happily.

[jensi08]

Great job and the surprise was so neat at the end...great flow here.

[roina_arwen]

This was very intriguing. Some overtones of The Hunger Games, but very cool. It would be great to read another chapter of this!