Short Story (adult content) "Reality according to Joey Fairbanks"

[odin1970]

“If it weren’t some kind of silly transgression on logic perhaps you might have a point

Comments

[proudlyfallen]

The Grammar Nazi strikes:

"at nauseum" should be "ad nauseum". It literally translates as something close to "until you're sick".

Sequel? I want to know what happened to Emily! Because if it's what I think happened... that wouldn't exactly be restoring innocence, would it?

[odin1970]

You have a lot of moxy dont you?

As far as spelling, I'll live with the errors I am a horrible speller, as long as the point is made the difference between a "T" and a "d" to me is insignifigant.

What do you think happened to Emily?

[proudlyfallen]

I think he did just enough to her to destroy her innocence, without doing enough to send her crying back to the teachers. Kids talk -- it would slowly get around, and the whole mood of their little playtime would be altered.

[safirekat]

I agree with the first sentence and the end of the first paragraph. But then again, I'm a fairly contrary person.

[odin1970]

so am I. Thank you for reading and commenting dear.