on the football field - one shot

[of_hearts]

Glee. Puck/Rachel. 1,548 words. PURE 150% ESTABLISHED RELATIONSHIP FLUFF, in the same "'verse" as the others. PG-13 (I guess?) for language and innuendo? Quick shout out to une_fille: you aight. Oh and this was entirely inspired by this photo:

Comments

[nyafangirl]

Awww *drowns in fluff*

“Whoa, lookin’ a little top-heavy there, champ.” ~ I freaking love all his little nicknames for her. Seems like a very Puck-thing to do - his way of showing his affection.

The first thing he thinks when his 100-pound waif of a girlfriend barrels into his midsection, is something along the lines of, this-is-the-funniest-shit-I-have-ever-seen-in-my-life. When he realizes he’s lying on his back, all the wind knocked out of him, and Rachel frantically pulling the helmet off her head, he sticks his tongue out and plays dead. ~ Love this separation of thoughts. Really emphasises how boys can only think of one thing at a time (as opposed to us girls). And yay for the tiny girl taking down the big guy! The boys think they're so freaking tough, but their egos are more fragile than we'll ever be.

“I mean…Doesn’t everyone have that moment? Where everything kind of clicks?” ~ Aww, Rach. I just want to grab her and hug her and explain stuff to her over and over until she gets it. Absolutely fabulous characterisation

[unequivocally]

Loved it bb! Painfully sweet.

Sorry I was unable to read it earlier! My mom came back from the hospital, so I had to go ~mingle~.

ILU.

[kimmy_77]

that was fraking adorable! i loved it SO much! great job!

[christiesk]

GOSH. I love the way you write them SO FUCKING MUCH YOU HAVE NO IDEA. It's like they're your typical high school couple but then THEY'RE TOTALLY DIFFERENT AND SPECIAL. And I can actually *feel* them being happy or sad or angry or whatever other emotion they have. AND YOU SHOULD FEEL SO PROUD OF THAT. Because there are a few writers who manage to make me feel what their characters feel. I bow in respect!

[lunamystik]

“And deprive your dads of two tickets to the gun show? That just seems wrong.”

Hilarious line, that.

This was just so cute! Even though it's supposed to sleet tonight, you have me dreaming of summer with this sweet, lovable fic.