on the football field - one shot

[of_hearts]

Glee. Puck/Rachel. 1,548 words. PURE 150% ESTABLISHED RELATIONSHIP FLUFF, in the same "'verse" as the others. PG-13 (I guess?) for language and innuendo? Quick shout out to une_fille: you aight. Oh and this was entirely inspired by this photo:

Comments

[ophelia1234]

Ok, first of all WHERE is that picture from??

Secondly-- the atmosphere you created in this story was absolutely amazing. You actually made me FEEL the summer and the heat and just ALL Of it.

(and you made me kind of miss those lazy days of summer when I was in high school)

[chrpangel]

beautiful!

[madmenfanatic]

I agree with ophelia1234's comment: I totally felt the summer heat, knew that cooler of beer and the "piss" that was in those beer cans, and I understood the feeling of freedom and fun and trust they had going.

I loved that she was taking part in something that he loved doing (football, not the sex!) - how cute it was. And that picture is really adorable. It brought the whole thing home.

Thanks for writing!

[fuzzy_paint]

his cargo shorts hanging considerably lower than his fire truck boxers.- this, um. YES. One of my favorite parts, weirdly, (or maybe not so weirdly because I... think about Puck's boxers a lot? Yes, probably)

ANYWAY: sweet, and fluffy and absolutely amazingly adorable.

GUNSHOW! LOL, PUCK ILU.

[pippivirgin]

ahhh. dies from fluffy perfection