win some, lose some - part two: july (2/2)

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GO TO PART ONE

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WIN SOME, LOSE SOME

july
(2/2)

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Comments

[becca_radcgg]

I can't even write coherant thoughts right now. To be perfectly honest.

I love this story.

I don't know what it is... but you're able to take details and just twirl them around in such a way that my heart absolutely stops.

I'm so invested in where they go from here, and you've written such an emotional rollercoaster for them... I'm just... almost at a loss for words.

The way you've had Puck develop feelings for her, for him to be the noble one and stop them and for Rachel to be like "we're good" is just so real to me.

Mostly, I love what you don't say. What you leave out to the imagination. It's brilliant and gorgeous and heartbreaking and addicting.

[of_hearts]

<333333333333333

ILU, B. Thank you a million times over for taking the time to leave such a lovely, thoughtful comment; it warmed my heart! I'm so happy you're enjoying this as much as I enjoy writing it...I can't even tell you how much I'm looking forward to churning out August. As I've told a lot of the people above, I've already outlined it and I can't wait to dig in. Hopefully it will be up sooner than it took me to post July!

I love what you don't say. What you leave out to the imagination.
THIS. Seriously, you just touched on exactly what I aim to achieve in everything I write. Ughhhh IL my readers. <3

[motylik]

Wow. I think I'm with Bams, I fear this isn't going to end well. But then I hope it will. Hmm. Can't wait to read the next part. Your writing is excellent. I really feel like it's summer when I read this. Which is nice given how aweful the weather is here. :D

[of_hearts]

Wow. I think I'm with Bams, I fear this isn't going to end well.
I can't even begin to tell you how much I grinned when you called him Bams. BAMSSSSSSS <3 <3 Oh how I love him so.

I'm so happy you're enjoying this so far! Thanks a bunch for taking the time to respond. :)

[fuzzy_paint]

the word BEERFUND written in sloppy permanent marker on the labelLOL

I don’t know who this Yoko Ono chick is, Puck, you don't know who Yoko is kill yourself. ROFLMAO, he doesn't know who Yoko is.

And then. God, I don't even know.

Legit speechless, so forgive the random drivel that pours out of my fingers at this moment in time. I love the slow buildup of his feelings for her. The guilt, and the fact that he thinks it's guilt but can't really classify it as such? KILLED ME! The jealousy at the frat party? The jealousy of Bam Bam (also, legit terrified that there's going to be some backstabbing in the future OMG), and the fact that Puck recognizes that Rachel connects with Bam Bam (even though he writes it off due to the fact that Bam Bam gets lots of play. Oh Puck, you have no idea how real ppl interact do you?) OMG SO MUCH LOVE please excuse the flailI'm terrified that this isn't going to end up well (and knowing the track record of summer romances. God. This isn't Grease and Puck and Rachel aren't Danny and Sandy) Way to get me

[of_hearts]

OMG HOW DID I NOT REPLY TO THIS WHEN I FIRST GOT IT? Listen, Fuzz, I can guarantee you that I read this, died from the love, and then felt so daunted with the task of replying that I put it off thinking that maybe later some genius reply would come to me. CLEARLY I FAIL AT LIFE. Ugh, wtvs wtvs. You know how I feel about your epic comments, dude...And it's no different with this one.

I will say two things though:

01. The jealousy of Bam Bam (also, legit terrified that there's going to be some backstabbing in the future OMG)
Did you read the latest installment yet?

02. NGL, I legit pushed off reading this as long as I could, cause I knew the second I did I would totally lose any ambition to write. Damn. Your talent just floors me.
OMG STFU. Please keep writing, your fic makes the world go 'round. I already said to andbless_mybaby in the el_puckerone spam post this past weekend that I'm pretty sure it could bring peace to the Middle East. WE JUST GOTTA SEND IT VIA ENVOY TO SEC OF STATE H.ROD STAT. But really, in all honestly, I'm blushing here. I'm absoultely

[comeundone]

Oh my goodness, I loved everything about this. My favorite parts were this:

“Noah! I think I’m really going to like college when I go…I made friends!”

Her eyes are wide and starry and he wants to make some douchebag comment about her being so fucking rookie, but she’s so genuinely happy-

He ducks his head and laughs before peering back up at her.

“Shit, you’re cute.”

&

“-He doesn’t like you. At all.” Puck butts in, before giving her knee a comforting pat. “Good thing I like you, babe.”

& the video store and how she was dressed on fourth of july. The 'Yo, Lady Liberty' cracked me up. I really just love the idea of Rachel always looking so spirited and GIRLY and Puck rolling his eyes but secretly loving it.

I hope these two work out, my heart will break if they don't.

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I really just love the idea of Rachel always looking so spirited and GIRLY and Puck rolling his eyes but secretly loving it.
<3

So glad you liked this!!! Thanks so much for the awesome review-- I can't wait to churn out August. :)

[27_seconds]

“I see you’re channeling your eternal desire to be featured on COPS.”
omg! This cracked me up!

Amazing chapters, can't wait for the rest :)

[of_hearts]

Thanks! So glad you liked it!