these foolish things - one-shot

May 16, 2010 11:58

Glee. 3,827 words. Puck/Rachel friendship.

Puck gets an idea. Rachel owes him a favor. Quinn eats Hot Pockets. Rachel Berry teaches Puck something about the art of seduction. Spoilers for Laryngitis (1x18).

A/N: Thank you, thank you, a million times thank you to une_fille for always humoring me, listening to my crazy talk and helping me make my ideas way ( Read more... )

genre: friendship, glee: laryngitis, character: noah puckerman, character: quinn fabray, ship: puck/rachel, genre: fluff, character: rachel berry, fic: one-shot, tv: glee, fic: missing scenes

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meggygurl May 16 2010, 16:33:52 UTC
omg i loved this. And i loved the hinting that they still want each other, but just can't right now. Guh. THESE TWO.

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of_hearts May 17 2010, 13:36:42 UTC
I'm so glad you liked this! Thanks for taking the time to drop a line.

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une_fille May 16 2010, 16:46:51 UTC
I LOVE QUINN AND EVERYTHING SHE CHOOSES TO BE.

I'd comment on the PR dynamic, the perfectly sexy ~friendship and ~understanding their have with each other, but the Puck/Quinn stuff owned me. Owned me.

Rachel’s strangely moved by the serious nod he gives Quinn before she lets go and gives him a feisty warning about getting veggie Hot Pockets the next time he goes to the store. He just laughs and smacks her ass playfully as she makes her way out.
Perfection.

And I love how into it Rachel gets and how her complex feelings about Mercedes come into play and he totally calls her on it. Moments where Puck & Rachel figure out that they're a lot more alike than they initially assumed always make me ridiculously happy.

And it's such a dick move on his part to pursue Mercedes but it's also kinda sweet? AND THE FACT THAT HE KINDA DIGS HER, SASS AND ALL. <3

I love love love it. ♥

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motylik May 16 2010, 19:08:17 UTC
Awww. This was adorable. :D :D Those two.

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biruuu May 16 2010, 19:39:36 UTC
Oh man, that whole Puck/Quinn/Rachel part. We need more of that in the show. I'd love to see even one "Puck and Quinn as ~platonic roommates" scene. They'd make such awesome friends, with him trying to disgust her by saying the most offensive things and her just bitch-facing him all the time.

“I’ll have you know, I actually have excellent taste in-”

“I’m really interested to know how you’re going to finish that sentence,” Quinn cuts her off.

LOL, oh snap. I love this girl.

This was hilarious and amazing. I loved it.

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cailet_06 May 16 2010, 19:43:10 UTC
Awesome story and I loved how your wrote the tension between the two! I also really enjoyed how you portrayed Quinn and Puck's relationship.

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