win some, lose some - part three: august (2/3)

[of_hearts]

Glee. 7,228 words. Noah Puckerman; Puck/Rachel.

The summer after Puck's junior year, picking up where we left off in August: Finn comes home and something changes.

For previous chapters: JUNE ( 1/1), JULY ( 1/2, 2/2), AUGUST ( 1/3)

A/N: So sorry for the ridicuously long wait for the second part of August! I'm going to be out of town for a bit, so

Comments

[thewokstar]

NOOOOOOOOOOOO
NOT BAMBAM
WHYYYYYYYYYYY
The moment Rachael actually saw BamBam,
I was like, "NO. YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO BAMBAM. DON'T MAKE HIM A REBOUUUUUUND."
And Puck just... Knocking him out like that.
I REALLY LIKE BAMBAM LOL.
I'M A BIG PUCKLEBERRY FAN BUT
IT SUCKS WHEN YOU MAKE A CHARACTER LIKE BAMBAM AND STICK HIM SOMEWHERE IN BETWEEN
EVEN THOUGH I KNOW IT'S STILL GOING TO BE PUCKLEBERRY IN THE END...
Poor BamBam. T____________T

[of_hearts]

"NO. YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO BAMBAM. DON'T MAKE HIM A REBOUUUUUUND."
OMG, the fact that this was your initial response makes me so ridiculouly happy. VIVA EL BAM-BAM!!!!!

Thanks so much for taking the time to share your thoughts and I'm glad you are enjoying this (or at least I hope you are? LOL). And dude, rest assured, Bam will come out of this a stronger man; I promise! And I think (read: hope) you'll enjoy what I've got in store for him next section.

[katrinbisiani]

I've just read all of the fic from the beginning to ... now and ... damn. I'm shivering and near tears and my stomach is clenched and it has been more than a couple of years since a fic took me like that.

I've come to care form Bam Bam and the guys and your Puck and Rachel and *god* they're all so human and ... while I'm still shipping Puckelberry I would not mind if you would write a what-if story where Bam Bam and Rachel do become a couple.

I'm actually shipping them as much as I ship Puckelberry and it was since the picnic that I've got the feeling that Bam Bam was losing his head for Rachel and right then, in that same moment, I got conflicted about which couple I wanted more to see ... Puck/Rachel or Bam/Rachel.

You made me almost crave Bam/Rachel fic and I know I won't find them anywhere because one of them is your original character and that actually makes me sad and ... now I'm rambling, ain't I?

Damn, you're good

[of_hearts]

Oh my goodness, this was comment was seriously the ultimate compliment; I can't even begin to tell you how flattered I am. I'm so happy you've enjoyed reading this as much as I've enjoyed writing...Of everything I've written, it's definitely my favorite, so I'm thrilled you feel so attached to it. And about the Bam-Bam stuff: that's just amazing. I know OCs can sometimes be hard to get into or really hit or miss, so thanks for giving mine a chance. AND UM LOL, if people would be down, I wouldn't at all be opposed to writing some snippet fics or "missing scene" type stuff as fic extras afterwards! So have no fear, there may be more coming your way after the end of August and the follow-up I' working on.

I've come to care form Bam Bam and the guys and your Puck and Rachel and *god* they're all so human
This. I can't even tell you what this means to me.

Thanks for taking time to leave such a thoughtful, lovely comment! I really appreciate it. <3

[ophelia1234]

Can I just say that I too am now a Bam/Rachel shipper (apparently)?? lol

[katrinbisiani]

Looking at the trend of the reviews we could probably create a Bam/Rachel shippers community and have it populated too ;)

[katrinbisiani]

Commenting again to add that Puck not going on stage with Rachel broke my heart and Bam going to sing Travolta with her healed it a little.

Also commenting again to display my new three icons *smiles proudly*

[dancing_donut]

DUDE SO AWESOME! SNATCHING FEWS! :D

[katrinbisiani]

Snatch away, just remember to credit ;)

[of_hearts]

OMG LOL! I'm flattered. :)

[lunamystik]

Puck really, really needs to get his shit together. I mean, I understand where he's coming from, what with the whole "Finn returning" thing, but he's got to know that Rachel isn't a girl who can be treated in such a cavalier way. I don't blame Rachel and I don't blame Bam for the way the chapter ended. I'm going to end this review the way I started it: Puck really, really needs to get his shit together.

[of_hearts]

Trufax. Puck is just...Puck. Awful and frustrating and entirely clueless. I'm working on part three and the follow-up as we speak, so I hope you like where I end up taking this. Thanks for taking the time to drop me a line! Hearing what you guys thought is one of the best parts of writing, especially when people leave as thoughtful as yours. <3

[lunamystik]

Always a pleasure! :)

[linty_goodness]

I cried..~wibble~
O.O

[of_hearts]

Don't cry! It will get better, I promise. <3333