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of_hearts

win some, lose some - part three: august (2/3)

May 24, 2010 23:06

Glee. 7,228 words. Noah Puckerman; Puck/Rachel.

The summer after Puck's junior year, picking up where we left off in August: Finn comes home and something changes.

For previous chapters: JUNE ( 1/1), JULY ( 1/2, 2/2), AUGUST ( 1/3)

A/N: So sorry for the ridicuously long wait for the second part of August! I'm going to be out of town for a bit, so ( Read more... )

ship: puck/rachel, genre: fluff, multi chap: win some lose some, character: noah puckerman

Comments 87

natih May 26 2010, 11:51:12 UTC

OMGGG WHY DO YOU HATE ME?? *___* you had to stop there, didn't you?? I'm dyiiing to know what happens next. Please...tell u're posting the 3rd part as soon as you can *puppy eyes*

duuude...that was the wake up call Puck needed...I mean, I love Bam...he's the sweetest with Rachel and this was bound to happen...but Puck and Rachel are just sooooo good together, their last bedroom talk was amazing, that I can't see myself rooting for Bam/Rachel...as much as I don't want to see Bam hurt.

nice move throwing Finn Hudson to the mix...jealous Puck is adorable...I hope we see more of Finn.

of_hearts June 8 2010, 02:43:19 UTC

NO, I DON'T HATE YOU, ILUUUUUU. I know, I stopped at the worst possible moment, didn't I? I initially planned on writing part three and posting it along with two, but I had a week long trip out of the country and I wasn't able to get it finished in time. I'm sorry about that! Now that I'm back and settled though, I'm working on three and should have it up soon. It goes without saying that it makes me so stupidly happy to know you're liking this. I've probs said this a million times, but it's such a blast to write, so it's just really cool to hear feedback from everyone as I go along.

I hope we see more of Finn.
Oh Finnbo. Don't worry, we'll definitely be seeing him in this story again!!

As always, thanks so much for taking the time to let me know what you thought! You guys are the best. <333

onlyonekitchen May 27 2010, 19:49:28 UTC

omg. i can't believe you ended it there! you evil little minx! i cant wait for more...this is so beyond incredible.

much love! more soon, please :)

of_hearts June 8 2010, 02:39:32 UTC

LOL, YOU CALLED ME A MINX. That's kind of amazing. I'm so happy you're enjoying this! Thanks so much for taking the time to drop me a line; it's so lovely to hear everyone's thoughts! I'm working on part three as we speak, so I hope you enjoy that when I get around to posting.

pippivirgin May 30 2010, 08:03:02 UTC

I'M LATE, I'M LATE, FOR A VERY IMPORTANT DATE. THAT WOULD BE READING THIS AND LEAVING A COMMENT ( ... )

of_hearts June 8 2010, 02:38:03 UTC

I'M LATE, I'M LATE, FOR A VERY IMPORTANT DATE. THAT WOULD BE READING THIS AND LEAVING A COMMENT.
OMG LOL. YOU? ARE FABULOUS. Dude, don't worry about replying late-- I've had an insane week with real life stuff, and (unfortunately) I always am a bit delayed in getting to comments. I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU'RE NOT GONNA BE AROUND UNTIL AUGUST, WTF NEW LJ FRIEND. That's not at all fair. I guess at least then you'll have a few parts to read all at once instead of waiting between posts! A perk, I suppose.

Anyway. Seriously, I'm not kidding-- I love everything your capslocky self chooses to be. I'm so happy you enjoyed this!!! Honestly, I wish you guys could see how loopy it makes me. Especially when you express it through cray-cray comments like this. (I MEAN THAT IN THE MOST FANTASTICALLY ENDEARING WAY, I PROMISE LOL.)

bleek and ethan better hookup. WE CAN ALL SMELL THE SEXUAL TENSION. MAKE IT HAPPEN.
LISTEN, ALL I'M SAYING IS STAY TUNED.

and yeah, i am sad to admit that i squeed a bit when they kissed.
LOL, I DID TOO? True story.

NOW. I ( ... )

pippivirgin June 8 2010, 03:11:17 UTC

Guess who got an iPhone and will be stalking your lj until you post a new chapter? ME

of_hearts June 8 2010, 14:47:08 UTC

L.O.L.

You are amazing.

I don't know if I said it already but I'M WORKING ON THREE NOW. So I'd say keep stalking around the weekend and it'll probably pay off. ;)

2looney May 31 2010, 19:35:18 UTC

I love how Puck is so insecure about Finn and doesn't even see the Bam thing coming. They are all so conflicted and Puck just needs to get his head out of his behind. The best line (for my money) was:

He knows he’s taken it for granted, but it’s not until Finn comes back that he starts to actually think about what this fucked up mess really is. He’s not looking for a girlfriend or anything and he sure as Hell doesn’t want one, but the thought of Finn swooping back in town and Rachel falling all over herself for him again feels pretty shitty.

Just beautiful!

of_hearts June 8 2010, 02:26:32 UTC

They are all so conflicted and Puck just needs to get his head out of his behind.
RIGHT? I totally agree.

I'm so glad you liked this part! We're finally getting to the part of the story that I've been looking forward to writing the most, so I'm so thrilled you're still digging it. As always, thanks a million for taking the time to drop me a line, and I hope you enjoy the rest!

Gah anonymous June 4 2010, 22:25:07 UTC

Team Bam-Bam all the way. I love Puck, but seriously Rachel needs to wake up and go for the guy who worships the ground she walks on. Awesome awesome story.

Re: Gah of_hearts June 8 2010, 02:25:01 UTC

OMG ANON, THIS COMMENT MADE ME GRIN LIKE A FOOL, THANK YOU SO MUCH. I probably sound crazy shouting that at you in all caps, but it was the truth. IDK, something about striking the perfect tone in a wonderfully concise little package. I'm so, so happy you're enjoying the story; thanks for taking the time to drop a line, and I hope you enjoy the parts to follow!