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of_hearts

win some, lose some - part three: august (2/3)

May 24, 2010 23:06

Glee. 7,228 words. Noah Puckerman; Puck/Rachel.

The summer after Puck's junior year, picking up where we left off in August: Finn comes home and something changes.

For previous chapters: JUNE ( 1/1), JULY ( 1/2, 2/2), AUGUST ( 1/3)

A/N: So sorry for the ridicuously long wait for the second part of August! I'm going to be out of town for a bit, so ( Read more... )

ship: puck/rachel, genre: fluff, multi chap: win some lose some, character: noah puckerman

Comments 87

hariboo June 6 2010, 10:13:01 UTC

I DID NOT LEAVE EPIC COMMENT ON THIS YET? FOR SHAME!!! (And yes, maybe I remembered last night during msn that this was posted and I hadn't made my way over, but I just don't know how much more I can gush about this. LET ME TRY.) First, let me talk about these men-boys. THEY ARE SO DELIGHTFUL. E-Money, yes that is my nickname for Ethan, is just trying to keep his band together because he ~knows they have something special. So special that one day they'll make awesome E! True Hollywood Stories about them, or even better VH1 Behind the Music. And how he and Bleeker are totally guy loving it up and it's glorious because suddenly I'm imaging their lives and times on the road, or you know, trying not to make out all the time because Bam would start planning their civil partnership ceremony. BRINGING ME TO BAMMERS. OH, BAMBAM, MY HEART GOES OUT TO YOU. We're all victims of Rachel's special brand of adorableness. We can't help we love the girl--she makes it so easy with the gold stars and special brand of crazy. Plus, she puts out this ~hug ( ... )

of_hearts June 8 2010, 02:21:34 UTC

LOL ARI, you were the beta for this monstrosity! Epic comments are totally not necessary, especially considering the feedback I got from you through e-mail made my year. That said, your epic comments are quite possibly one of my favorite things about your wonderful self. LOLING FOREVER @ MEN-BOYS. And E-Money! And VH1 Behind the Music! Basically, I love you in every way, please don't change.

And how he and Bleeker are totally guy loving it up and it's glorious because suddenly I'm imaging their lives and times on the road, or you know, trying not to make out all the time because Bam would start planning their civil partnership ceremony.
THIS. Not only did it kill me, it also may have sparked a spin-off series.

And I love how they both know it's the wrong thing to do, but they just can't stop, because Rachel needs to feel wanted (Puck!!!) and BamBam for all his wisdom is still a dude with a major crush.
I want to hug this sentence.

Finn coming back changes everything but I hate how she just accepts it.Do you think she even ( ... )

lilorphandanie June 15 2010, 01:08:48 UTC

Waiting...waiting...waiting...waiting :)

I'm officially on Summer break, and need some good reading material :) (Trust me, the teachers love summer as much as the kids)

I realize that posting the last part of this means the story is ending...but...the characters are so real and I just need to know what happens. Patience has never been a virtue I've held to very well.

I want to kick Puck in the shin and hug him at the same time. He's such a moron!

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story!

dontwannapanic June 21 2010, 05:50:44 UTC

Came here from a rec post! This has become my favorite Puck/Rachel fic EVER -- I usually dislike multi-parters/non-PWP but damn, this is great.

I got teary-eyed, oh man. And I had been waiting for the inevitable Bam scene; great writing with that, by the way. The subtle hints were A+.

Love this.

anonymous July 18 2010, 11:40:59 UTC

I've been reading your story and it's really good but you haven't updated for ages. This is probably going to sound really stupid but I just want to make sure you're okay because of the distance between posts. I hope you are okay and I know heaps of people would really love for the next part of this to be posted. Just thought I'd stop by to try to check in on you, you never know what's happened with people on the net.

nicoline88 July 20 2010, 06:44:41 UTC

Okay, I may or may not have already posted a comment for this one, but since it's been a while I think it cancels out the other one.

Puck, Puck, you stupid fuck.

Okay, now that that's out of the way, onward with my review!

“It’s friends coming together to celebrate the beauty of song! And having a ball! And experiencing life through the pop hits of years gone by! Oh, you’re going to love it!” < I love this so much. I can just see Rachel twirling around and saying tra la la at the end of this sentence. It's just made of so much win ( ... )