two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, chapter 4

[of_hearts]

Glee. 3,508 words. I don't know how this ended up so long! I kinda had to sacrifice Puck's inner monologue-ish third person narrator for this chapter because I had too much Rachel stuff going on and dialogue and I'm bad at multi-tasking :( But have no fear, it should be swinging back around next chapter. Thanks so much for all your continued

Comments

[rebelliousrose]

Whee! This just keeps getting better, and I LOL at many of your lines. Please, keep going! (You cut off at the good part. Between you and adlervan, you guys are killing me!

[pixie180]

I am loving were you are taking this story...they are both in "love" with other people and not seeing what they have in each other...adding sex to the mix is going to make this mess, even muessier. The fact that Rachel would even go for this plan and pick Puck as her "outlet" speaks volumes to how much she is starting to care for him, but not fully seeing it herself.

[glamour_pixie]

=D
i love this sfm!!

[re_vitalized]

BAHHH, amazing. Can't wait for the next part!

[manicmarauder88]

SHE TOTALLY JUST SAID PENIS. WHY DID HE FIND THIS SO HILARIOUS?
I found it extremely hilarious as well. Maybe because I'm mentally twelve years old.

I just can't get over how perfect your Puck is. Fan-fucking-tastic.

This isn’t about me anyway, it’s about you and all your horny lady vibes.
I think this is the Puckiest line to ever be written. Not to mention damn hilarious.

I can't even handle how excited I am for the next installment.... I'm hoping for some seriously smutty filth.