two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl - chapter 7

Nov 14, 2009 11:25

Glee, 3,751 words. So, this is angst with a side of angst with a slice of angst pie for dessert. When I’m done with this, I’ll seriously need to write some fluff or something, because this is getting out of control. I hope I was still able to stay true to the characters and didn’t succumb to melodrama…One of the scenes is kind of a cliché, but I ( Read more... )

ship: puck/rachel, fic: post-ep, tv: glee, glee: mash up, multi chap: two lost souls

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meggygurl November 14 2009, 17:27:10 UTC
eoirjer.

I am addicted to this story. Moooooore. The angst, god, my heart bleeds from it. And it is soooo lovely.

Guh. More more!

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scullyish November 14 2009, 17:28:25 UTC
as always, this is amazing. and omfg this, He tried to speak, but he was shaking uncontrollably from the cold and his body wracked with quiet sobs as years of pent up shit came bubbling to the surface. His kid was dead.

MY HEART OMG.

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sugarskyhigh November 14 2009, 17:58:18 UTC
Wow. Beautiful beautiful angst! ♥

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hbfic November 14 2009, 18:25:13 UTC
oh Noah...you poor boy!

Amazing stuff!

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musical_jay November 14 2009, 18:38:35 UTC
amg, my poor weeping heart. this is amazing, truly amazing.

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