Comments | of_hearts: five times puck got rachel to break the law and one time they get caught

of_hearts

five times puck got rachel to break the law and one time they get caught

Dec 26, 2009 16:02

Glee. Puck/Rachel. 5,845 words. Prompt from xxtisheryxx : Five times Puck gets Rachel to break the law and the one time they get caught. Title nicked from The National.

Patterns of Fairytales

everything we ever planned to ever do.

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( He reached into his pocket and pulled a Swiss Army knife out and held it in front of her. “All you gotta do is take care of the front tires, okay? I’ll do the rest.” )

ship: puck/rachel, genre: five times, genre: fluff, tv: glee

Comments 55

christiesk December 26 2009, 21:54:30 UTC

Eeeeeh I saw this on my flist and I literally shouted from joy. That was SO amazing. I simply adore your writing*_* I'll be waiting for more fics from you and I know they'll all be as good as this one:D

of_hearts December 26 2009, 23:14:25 UTC

Heee, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! Thanks so much for the lovely comment; this was a lot of fun to write. All the prompts I got in that post were great, but this one definitely jumped out at me right away. And I can't wait to write more!

babylil December 26 2009, 22:30:32 UTC

This was awesome, and not at all confusing!

of_hearts December 26 2009, 23:14:39 UTC

Thank you!!

hariboo December 26 2009, 22:45:46 UTC

So, I feel like a stalker because I got home, checked my flist, saw this, and clicked this mother in a instance! DUDE, I LOVE YOUR PR FIC. Seriously, I love the way you write them sfm, because everything feels pitch perfect. So you're going to get my reaction by parts bc that's how I'm rolling today and each part feels like it's own little fic expect they're not and I'm just gonna get on with it:

- He's commiting a felony to defend her honour! NOAH PUCKERMAN, you wonderful hoodlum, you! I liked (well, not liked but well done) how you dealt with the whole pregnancy plot line because I just want it over with too and it's sad and allow for Puck to have some angst and deals with the distance of Finn and Quinn well in the fic. Props, hun! Also making it a point that this is not a fairytale, because ITA so much. (Singing songs doesn't make everything easier, just more adorable!) Plus there's jealous Puck, and I love jealous!Puck because he honestly doesn't believe he's jealous which makes it so much better, because they're secret friends ( ... )

of_hearts December 26 2009, 23:07:40 UTC

I have to go to dinner now and do some serious studying (I spent my whole afternoon finishing this when I really wasn't supposed to...WHY DOES THIS NOT SURPRISE ME?) but I just want to sayyyyyyy I don't know if you knew this about me, BUT I LOVE LONG COMMENTS. Like, they're probably my favorite thing about LJ next to really, really pretty picspams that are excessively long and include witty commentary. SO THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU! I'm going to come back and give this a proper, epic reply later in the evening!!!

(Sorry again for skipping out on you as a beta, but given how much you enjoyed it, I'm kind of glad I did! :D)

of_hearts December 28 2009, 06:07:23 UTC

Dude, I know it's so awful to say but I seriously hope they have Quinn have a miscarriage. Not because I'm some evil bitch who wishes the worst on her character, just because I think it would be so amazing for these characters and this story and basically everything this show tries to be, you know? It would not only give these kids a chance to shine (although -- don't throw tomatoes at me, but -- I'm not necessarily confident that Dianna has the acting chops to do it? YIKES) and it would be all dark comedy which would be BRILLIANT seeing as that's totally what this show is, but in disguise. YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN?

Singing songs doesn't make everything easier, just more adorable!
THIS IS WHY I LOVE YOU.

I love jealous!Puck because he honestly doesn't believe he's jealous which makes it so much better, because they're secret friends, but they're also more, they just haven't accepted it yet.
I'm such a sucker for the ~secret friendship~ trope, for reals.

Yeah, I love Finn/Puck bffery and I want them back togetherSO DO I, BB, SO DO I! ( ... )

musical_jay December 26 2009, 22:53:33 UTC

I love, love, love how one drabble melds into the other. Perfect. And she laughs when she finally gets busted! Mwahahaha.

<3

of_hearts December 26 2009, 23:14:58 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

happywriter06 December 26 2009, 22:55:15 UTC

Excellent!! Spot on characterization. I can see this happening.

Just two things: So while he and Finn laughed and joked and dicked around in basketball and sometimes in Glee...
You mean football, right?
The girl was the world’s fasted text messager...
Should be 'fastest'.

of_hearts December 26 2009, 23:02:34 UTC

You mean football, right?
Nope! This piece takes place sometime in the future after Sectionals, so football's ended and they're in basketball season now...So basically in the winter.

Thanks so much for catching that typo! And for the comment!