Comments | of_hearts: five times puck got rachel to break the law and one time they get caught

of_hearts

five times puck got rachel to break the law and one time they get caught

Dec 26, 2009 16:02

Glee. Puck/Rachel. 5,845 words. Prompt from xxtisheryxx : Five times Puck gets Rachel to break the law and the one time they get caught. Title nicked from The National.

Patterns of Fairytales

everything we ever planned to ever do.

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( He reached into his pocket and pulled a Swiss Army knife out and held it in front of her. “All you gotta do is take care of the front tires, okay? I’ll do the rest.” )

ship: puck/rachel, genre: five times, genre: fluff, tv: glee

Comments 55

kandykanemel December 26 2009, 23:55:51 UTC

this was really cute~

of_hearts December 28 2009, 05:27:44 UTC

Ha, thanks!

kimmy_77 December 26 2009, 23:56:37 UTC

Christ that was freaking awesome! I laughed so damn hard my husband thinks I'm drunk. Brilliant story!

of_hearts December 28 2009, 05:29:01 UTC

LOL, that's amazing. Thanks so much for dropping a line! It was such ridiculous fun to write this, it's great to know you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed putting it together!

almostgaby December 27 2009, 00:17:53 UTC

SQUEEEEEEEE this was flipping fantastic!!!!

of_hearts December 28 2009, 05:29:55 UTC

:)! So glad you liked it!!

wildchild111 December 27 2009, 00:18:22 UTC

This was so fun. Nice job!

of_hearts December 28 2009, 05:30:04 UTC

Thanks :)

psychme December 27 2009, 00:27:06 UTC

Oh, I absolutely adored this! I really like your Puck and Rachel and I love how the five things flowed, one into the next, and built their relationship. I completely LOVED that last part; Rachel's reaction surprised me and yet it absolutely fit, and I'm just left sitting here, still grinning as I type this.

Yeah, that was fabulous. Thank you, and I hope you write more of these two in the near future. :)

of_hearts December 28 2009, 05:36:16 UTC

Rachel's reaction surprised me and yet it absolutely fit, and I'm just left sitting here, still grinning as I type this.
Heeee, I was toooooo! When I was first writing it, I felt like Rachel's reaction might have been a bit much, but...Puck's such a bad influence! It was bound to rub off eventually ;)

I got the suggestion to write a companion piece...Five times Rachel gets Puck to do the right thing sort of a thing. So...Maybe you'll see more of the two of them sooner than you previously expected! (Man, I'm such a tease.)

psychme December 28 2009, 06:23:37 UTC

Ooooh, that sounds great. Consider me thoroughly teased and anxiously awaiting said companion piece! :)