LJ Idol Week Six - The Lightning Strike

Apr 19, 2014 10:44

Sometimes we become the villain of our own story. It's a curious thing, realizing that I have been an unreliable narrator of my own behaviour and decisions, of my own life. I have unknowingly possessed a destructive power to wound and shatter the same way I had been wounded and shattered. Weapons can be infinitely more dangerous when you don't ( Read more... )

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ohelectricshock April 27 2014, 00:06:05 UTC
This makes me smile so much, thank you :)

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itsjustc April 22 2014, 18:44:03 UTC
I'm loving how this story is unravelling.

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ohelectricshock April 27 2014, 00:06:19 UTC
I am so glad to hear this! Thanks for reading :)

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rayaso April 22 2014, 18:49:49 UTC
I enjoyed this very much, especially the opening. Based on other comments, I am going to read the earlier entries.

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ohelectricshock April 27 2014, 00:06:39 UTC
Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the rest of the entries :)

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eternal_ot April 23 2014, 13:00:30 UTC
Ah!I like the way it's going..hoping for a good time with Mike...wonderfully etched..all the emotions are conveyed very well! Kudos! and Cheers!..:)

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ohelectricshock April 27 2014, 00:06:58 UTC
Thank you so much! I am excited to write about Mike some more.

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whipchick April 23 2014, 20:39:37 UTC
Ugh, what a classic manipulator he was. I'm glad to see that the story seems to be evolving through greater self-realization and empowerment :)

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ohelectricshock April 27 2014, 00:07:31 UTC
Absolutely, thank you! Things get much darker for a time but I pull through :) Bit nervous to try writing it all out for this week but we'll see how it goes!

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