OhSam Triple Play 2015!

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The comm hosted this little event a couple of years ago, and as November 2 is an auspicious day for our darling Sam, today would be the perfect time to revisit this challenge. Welcome to the Triple Play 2015!

Comments

[amberdreams]

1.) Setting: somewhere flat and Midwestern
2.) Other character: Dean
3.) H/C scenario: tornado related injuries

RE: Tornado Warning 7

[semirah]

Gorgeous! I liked all the little details and the life you gave the side characters. I loved that Sam flipping Dean off was responsive enough for the EMT. I LOVE the last line. Oh, Sam. Me, too.

And I found it sweet and so true to character that Sam would stop and explain what a fishing story was to Cas.

RE: Tornado Warning 7

[quickreaver]

Fantastic! Never apologize for length; it was exactly right.

RE: Tornado Warning 7

[cowboyguy]

This was awesome! I loved all of the little details - the sheet of rain chasing them to the car, Sam's aversion to blue Gatorade, the subdivison of matchsticks and tree debris, the fishing story. I love that both of them think to ask for people's names in an emergency, because that's just the kind of guys they are, keeping things under control and trying to help. I loved Sam's "no medications or allergies" bit, and Dean being pissed at the EMTs but then immediately helpful and concerned again. And, oh man, Sam's spotty vision and slow-build pain and the realization that it's worse than he thought. Fantastic job!

RE: Tornado Warning 7

[reggie11]

That was awesome! We don't really get tornadoes in Australia, only teeny tiny ones, so I'm always fascinated by tornado stories. I was a bit thrown by the town name, Hobart is the capital city of Tasmania. Great pacing and characterisation. You nailed their voices perfectly.

Re: RE: Tornado Warning 7

[ameliacareful]

Hobart, Australia! I never even thought of that! You guys don't have regular tornadoes but do have fire tornadoes once in awhile. http://youtu.be/s1dH0zyzl0I

It's also a real town in western Oklahoma. I picked it randomly. :)

RE: Tornado Warning 7

[themegalosaurus]

I LOVED THIS SO HARD. the tone of it was so spot on, the understatedness of sam's approach to the whole thing; the picture of the glass in his leg and dean's glee and sue's refrain 'he saved me'. i really, really enjoyed it. a lot. i'll be saving it (and reccing it) for sure.

RE: Tornado Warning 7

[ameliacareful]

Thank you so much! Sue is based on some of my Asian women students who seem to be very concerned with credit being given where credit is due. And Dean's glee is well, you know, Dean.