FIC: "Alone in the Crowd."

[okuribi]

He couldn’t breathe.

Surrounded in the dying embers from the towers around him, his entire vision obscured in red, he found himself gasping for air, his lungs screaming for the oxygen that would not come. He was trembling visibly, face turning pale, as his parted lips drew in mouthfuls of oxygen in order to satisfy his starving body. It was not

Comments

[sideshow_emma]

Holy crap.. I just had the biggest attack of goosebumps ever.

That was incredible.

Just..

wow

☆

[ccgensou]

That is one of the most powerful things I have read in a very, very, very long time.

I would say more, but... words seem to fail me.