FIC: "Body Language"

[okuribi]

Pause for a moment.

Take away everything-the guitars, the drums, and the bass.

Leave only the voice there, and allow it to sing its own melody.

This is how I personally felt he sang at his best. With no underlying aggressive sounds in the background, you could hear his voice fully echo across any distance. It was a voice that

Comments

[kestral_kitsune]

ooo that was great love the writing and the mood you set. I haven't read any good diru fics for a while and I'm glad I've read this one ^__^ keep up the good work.

[okuribi]

Wow really? It was good? Uwaa, thank you~ ^^

[tora_bish]

Awww that was cute. I like the whoel pause and resume thing. ^.^

[okuribi]

I'm glad you did. ^^ I wanted to wrap the story around that, and it seems it worked! Thank you for your comment. =D

[_hakushi]

You have to stop beating up on yourself like that, I swear... Or I'd whack you myself. YOU. ARE. AMAZING.

My head is still turned to goo at how absolutely brilliant that was. It's been 5 minutes now. That was really good. Now repeat it after me, or else (YES I MEAN IT) =/

And did I tell you that I fell completely more in love with your Die? He's so perfect *______* -spazzes-

[okuribi]

You kill me. XD Every. single. time. I'M TRYING NOT TO BE SO HARSH ON MYSELF REALLY. ;__;

I'm so glad you liked it though. You told me here and last night and I'm still highly appreciative of it! I'll try my best to repeat after you on those words. ._.;

And LOL! My Die-muse totally inspired me for this as well. He sat there as I did most of the writing. He was so picky how I wrote it, too. >_>;

[pixychild]

This was really gorgeous I'm glad I stumbled across it. Very interesting characterization. I enjoyed it because I have to agree when it's just Kyo's voice echoing in the hall he's at his most powerful.

"I thought you would have been more subtle than the typical fan girl silently professing her undying want to marry me…” <-- that was funny I couldn't help but laugh even if it was a bit mean ... hehe

[okuribi]

I can only imagine how his voice sounds echoing in the hall. I've yet to see Dir en grey live, but hearing everyone else's view on it, I just sit back and think and I fully believe it too~.

Lol! I struggle with how to characterise Kyo. Mostly I see him as a good guy with a lot of sarcasm and a healthy dose of bluntness. Poor Die has to endure it all the time, hehe.

Thank you for commenting. I appreciate it. ^^

[pixychild]

If ever get the chance to see them do it! No matter what you have to do to get there. I know you will not be disappointed. Kyo's voice is just amazingly powerful and emotional I was in complete shock the whole night and it's something that will stay with me forever.

lol Kyo is hard one to pin down! But I tend to imagine he's like that as well, a good guy but plenty of sarcasm and bluntness just like you say ^_^

[yo_dono]

That's one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read; thank you so much.

[okuribi]

Ah.. you're so very welcome. ♥

And thank you for reading and commenting. That means a lot to me.

[yo_dono]

Well, if you ever feel like writing something like that again I'd be happy to read it =)