Comments | okuribi: FIC: "Body Language"

okuribi

FIC: "Body Language"

Nov 25, 2007 17:58

Pause for a moment.

Take away everything-the guitars, the drums, and the bass.

Leave only the voice there, and allow it to sing its own melody.

This is how I personally felt he sang at his best. With no underlying aggressive sounds in the background, you could hear his voice fully echo across any distance. It was a voice that ( Read more... )

fic, dir en grey, writing, die, kyo, die/kyo

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andidp November 27 2007, 05:10:32 UTC

ohmigod ohmigod ohmigod...that's all the speech i can come up with at the moment,... f'ckn brilliant writing

deadlycherry November 29 2007, 07:31:19 UTC

this is great.

I enjoyed how you described Kyo in Die's POV. On the other hand, I could feel how Die loved Kyo from his words.

please write more DiexKyo story (>.<)

mo_chan_tf January 3 2008, 20:41:00 UTC

that was really, really wonderful. as fonulyn said, you captured kyo's character so deeply and truthfully.

I loved how Kyo "told" Die about his feelings, writing it on the window. it was unexpected, and creative from your part.

I hope to see more of your DiexKyo stories coming. :3

cadkitten January 9 2008, 05:59:51 UTC