actually, i think it's looking pretty good! i like the way you divided up the skills section, is very impressive looking, and even if they skim, they'll still catch the gist of it.
Umm... I hate to say it since I guess I will be taking the devil's role and making you "dissolve into tears" and I know your mom already told you this so I will be in even worse shape but your objective could really use work
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to late. As for the objective, this particular position is rather vague, so I was having more than a little trouble being specific about it, but I'm not going to worry to hard, Dad thinks I wrote a pretty decent cover letter. And I feel rather dishonest stating in my resume that I really want to work at a design company. I don't care, I want to work somewhere that I'll be able to make enoug at and go to school at the same time. anyways. And I put Mac OS because I can work with older versions, up to a point as well as OS X. I suppose they probably are pretty much all OS X, that they have some way of making you update it. whatever. I'm not worrying though, I already sent it in. Love you.
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