songbird

Jul 04, 2014 02:29

Title: songbird
Pairing: Yixing/Kyungsoo
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 838
A/N: Team Cheese Drabble #2: "i will sing to you everyday, if it will take the pain away"

A crash. A slam. A brief silence followed by heavy breaths and heavier footsteps. )

yixing/d.o., fanfic

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chocoyeol July 4 2014, 14:20:58 UTC
It started off so nicely and then my whole world blew up in flames.

WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS I'MMA CREY

The story progression is fast but enough for it to make sense. I was a little confused of their relationship and such until the middle where the pace picks up abit. Yixing and Kyungsoo singing... The way you describe the scene was so amazing. The fact that Yixing had made sure that Kyungsoo wouldn't be scared was cute but the ending--

oH GOD THE ENDING I'M STILL SAD. The way you incorporated the lyrics and the rest of the fic is great, though very heartbreaking that Yixing never really found out how Kyungsoo felt about him...

I love you but I'm so hurt. I'm ow.

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chenhuns July 4 2014, 14:32:15 UTC
great, great work.
i loved how yixing was trying to make sure kyungsoo won't be scared
and kyungsoo has real feelings for yixing ;A;

Tears streaming through Yixing’s cold hand
brb i'm just going to curl up and cry

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seoulcatchers August 31 2014, 02:51:52 UTC
you just singlehandedly combined les mis and exo

it takes a while to let it sink in

it's still sinking in

but while that happens let me just say I LOVE YOU FOR THAT MUSICALS ARE LIFE BUT EXO IS PRETTY DARN CLOSE AND I JUST.

THANK YOU.

and also thank you for this amazingly beautiful rare pairing that you wrote perfectly.

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