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omoikkiri

一期一会 // Kis-My-Ft2

Sep 27, 2011 12:12

For crazy_otaku911.

一期一会 (Ichi-go Ichi-e)
Fujigaya/Iida
PG-13, 1152 words, AU
Fujigaya the rockstar + Iida the bookkeeper + one hand-touch in a moment in time.

( It's a bit silly, like the romantic comedies your sister still loves to watch, but trying to put Love into words always sounds both exaggerated and understated at the same time. )

%oneshot, iida kyohei, fujigaya taisuke

Comments 13

crazy_otaku911 September 27 2011, 19:21:59 UTC

CRIES. Omg. I just can't get over the magic that I put the song on and he sang the line right as I hit that text. Pure fucking magic.

I love it. ♥ Like, I love that Iida just had this moment that changes his life and omg the line...

You once touched a star without getting incinerated (only a little burn that left a lasting impression); you're afraid that the second time, you won't be as lucky.it's just purely fantastic. ;~; Waksjdflaskdjf I just love that Fujigaya's this... raw, wild creature (Supernova, I love that. Like a phoenix only burning brighter) and Iida's not, but it hits him and stays with him for the rest of his life ( ... )

omoikkiri September 27 2011, 19:24:47 UTC

I never expected it to actually happen, haha.
LOLOL SUCH LOW EXPECTATIONS

crazy_otaku911 September 27 2011, 19:26:06 UTC

No, no. I meant in general. :( I had the idea for ages before throwing it at you. ♥ And you did it so much better than I ever could have and I'm just. AHHHHH. SO HAPPY.

/equally inappropriate icon

elindar September 27 2011, 20:30:14 UTC

uwaa, this was beautiful. ;; interesting pairing(i... think i have never seen/read fujigaya/iida before?), and i really liked the setting of the fic. taipi as a rock star, omg. AND IIDA. ♥

i love how they're complete opposites, living in totally different worlds and omg, how i loved the short, fated encounter between them. *w* like rin said above, magical!

idek what to say, words fail me right now. i really liked this, and the second person didn't bother me at all (...for some reason i end up writing in second person way too much times myself >>;).
♥! thank you for this!

omoikkiri September 28 2011, 03:18:30 UTC

OMG an unsolicited comment! (aka I didn't crosspost... although I might have tweeted, so maybe this was solicited hahaha *rambles*) ♥

Haha well, Iida is kind of elusive, at this point in kisumai fandom, so I thought I would have liked to pair him with somebody besides Yokoo, and Fujigaya was just so intriguing~ as a pairing. (Incidentally, his stage name is totally F.xxx in this fic XD/)

I've totally read good second person pov fics, it's just... you know, usually associated with OCs and stuff, which is awkwardd.

Thank you for reading! :)

loveandcoffee September 28 2011, 08:16:20 UTC

This was so beautiful, and so well written ;_;. It's the first time I read something written in second person that's so effective.
Also, I am a sucker for fated meetings so this resounded pretty deep within my heart. Thank you ♥

omoikkiri September 29 2011, 02:30:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad everyone seems to be finding the second person fitting/acceptable for the tone of this piece and it's not just me that thinks that way. XD Thanks for reading~

snowqueenofhoth September 28 2011, 14:46:38 UTC

Aw, I really loved this. :)

Fate and destiny and nothing really working out, but knowing it was real anyway. Or something. ^-^;

♥

omoikkiri September 29 2011, 02:31:11 UTC

Ah, yes, something like that *doesn't know either* 8D

Thank youuu ♥

orange_c_c September 28 2011, 16:21:52 UTC

Wow, this is really - I'm not sure of the correct word - Deep? Raw? LOL.

I love how you managed to convey across all the emotions so well <3

Sorry, there seems to be something wrong with my command of the English language right now -.-

omoikkiri September 29 2011, 02:32:35 UTC

XD Your command of the English language seems just fine to me! Thanks for reading and your lovely comment!