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omoikkiri

Don't Begin Without Me // Beginners!

Dec 31, 2012 13:45

Ending the year with a "bang" 8D/

Don't Begin Without Me
Tachibana Danji/Shimura Teppei
NC-17, 4062 words, pwp (handcuffs, orgasm denial)
Set middle of episode 10, the night after Teppei's race.

( He looks incredible, long and sleek and tanned against the sterile white sheets, his wrists handcuffed to the sides of the bed with the regulation handcuffs they'd been given to practice with in class. )

%oneshot, kitayama hiromitsu, fujigaya taisuke

Comments 19

jojibear January 1 2013, 00:37:19 UTC

First time commenting, even though I've read all the previous installments, albeit long after you'd posted them.

So, like, I totally know how the series ends and everything, but still /le hurt from feels. Teppeeiiiiii~

omoikkiri January 1 2013, 02:00:32 UTC

Aww, I'm sorry? XD;; Actually this was totally supposed to be totally angsty "give you something to remember me by" fic at first so uh, idk, it turned out more happy than I had intended 8D/

ETA: wow your strikeout totally worked, I totally... didn't see it somehow?! anyway, thank you for commenting this time! :3 I can totally understand silent reading actually, but of course it's really warm and fuzzy to know that people have been reading XD!

ext_1497137 January 1 2013, 03:23:36 UTC

yesssssssss ugh i love these two and what you did with them and their FEELINGS. *_*

omoikkiri January 1 2013, 04:14:02 UTC

Feelings are haaard, especially from Danji's pov, so emotionally constipated as he was at first ;;

Thank you! :3

elindar January 1 2013, 05:03:11 UTC

ajshjkhasjhaasd the first fic of the year, AND IT'S THIS ♥

hehe, danji's punishment and taipi's teppei's life being a bit hard again. poor him, danji really took his time XD but HOTTT.
this was already so good, and then THE FEELINGS at the end, omg my heart can't take this ;~; need to reread the happy ending again after this!

i've enjoyed these fics so much~ and this made me want to rewatch the drama once again ack XD
HAPPY NEW YEAR~ \:3/

omoikkiri January 2 2013, 06:01:23 UTC

Haha, last fic of the year for me XD!

lolol I don't think Fujigaya would take this sort of treatment from Kitayama 8D;;;

I wish I had the time to cut out all the good parts and just make a digest of Danji/Teppei :x

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO ♥

crazy_otaku911 January 1 2013, 17:13:50 UTC

Haha, so I totally skimmed for all the dialogue and then the angst. WHY did you ignore my advice 8|||; (at least there's the drabble \o/ Glorious drabble, how did I not know it existed before. ♥♥♥)

*noms on all the feels*

... I should actually! Finish this drama, shouldn't I? 8D;;

omoikkiri January 2 2013, 05:59:29 UTC

What? What advice? also IIIIIII (for the most part) wanted it this way 8( to gratify myself! Also lol stop reading porn you don't even care about and go finish the drama!

kira_shadow January 2 2013, 23:49:31 UTC

;A; bah, canon!

loving this! Danji's perspective is interesting to see things from but I can imagine how hard it is to write ._. !!
I like the subtle things he does, caring about Teppei's knee and all and him having such complicated feelings and...and...aah the end ;A;

also, I'm liking all the dirty bits again

The ceiling is too low for Teppei to be able to move on Danji's length unless he leans forward like he's hugging Danji. It's awkward, because as much as they've enjoyed sex with each other, they certainly aren't like that, but amidst all the maneuvering Danji hits Teppei's prostate again and fuck if Teppei cares how close he has to get to Danji, he just needs to come ( ... )

omoikkiri January 4 2013, 02:42:51 UTC

Haha yeah, it was hard because it was Danji and needed to have feelings, but ... well! It's done now, at least \XD/

♥♥♥♥

irrelevant icon is irrelevant

kira_shadow January 4 2013, 03:16:07 UTC

Icoooon! I couldn't get a good cap of that ;A;

♥