- The Meme In Which You Give Concrit -

[mykindasong]

Okay, ignore that we're ignoring the usual set-up. It's just not the way we roll! Don't worry, the same things can still happen.

Welcome to the...

The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.Rules are simple, because we like it that way

Comments

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[anonymous]

 

Re: A

[arashijun]

arashijun (please >.

Re: A

[auburn_witch]

auburn_witch

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[anonymous]

I loved you mirrored fic with ohmiya!

B

[anonymous]

 

Re: B

[bananyphophany]

bananyphophany
I'm always seeking to improve. :) Don't feel you need to be anonymous to offer me advice, since I don't take offence at genuine, helpful concrit.

Re: B

[anonymous]

I've read a few of your KoyaShige fics, and it's always struck me as amazing how you can write them so much but in completely different situations without giving the reader deja vu. ♥ On the other hand, your stories are often short and I get the sense that a good idea has been wasted on something that could have been longer and more detailed.

Re: B

[bananyphophany]

Aww, thank you! :D
Yeah, I think my KoyaShige stories were pretty short, I agree. Ironically, now that I'm writing not KoyaShige fics anymore, I'm actually suffering from the opposite problem, and everything has gotten wordy as fff... :'D I need to find a middle ground.

C

[anonymous]

 

Re: C

[changetje]

changetje @ euphoricfields

Re: C

[anonymous]

seriously, you wrote the most amazing fics I ever read! I really like your style, how you describe the characters and their feelings...

I particularly like Lullaby (let me sleep), Don't stop believing, Love is simple with you,...

keep up with the good work! *hearts*

Re: C

[anonymous]

I remember reading your PIN fics and LOVING THEM to the point of recommending it to a lot of people!
I love the way you describe them, they're so much themselves. And, in the fics I read, Jin was topping, another thing I LOVE and I don't see that often, sigh.

D

[anonymous]

 

Re: D

[digitalized_]

digitalized_ @ tags / displaced_bytes

Am I the only D? D:

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[dino_rawr122]

Uwah, hope I'm not....too late? xD [/Sho!Fail]

dino_rawr122

[diamondsjack]

diamondsjack. the fic index is here.

i... feel like my spelling and technicals are generally okay, but if there are other issues please let me know. m(___)m characterisation? voice? too many line breaks/commas? lol. do i flesh out worlds enough...? i know i still have a ways to go, but no idea what i can improve on (or how), so. ♥ kind thanks in advance!

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[anonymous]

 

Re: E

[elanielyn]

elanielyn @ onionlullabys

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[crazy_otaku911]

I went through a few of your fics out of curiosity. Sadly, I'm not much of an Akame fan, so I was...rather limited. That aside.

Your writing feels a bit rushed...and I noticed that sometimes you switch from past to present tense and back again. I like your ideas. They seem very real and interesting, so I liked reading!

Re: E

[isolated_killer]

You are simply amazing. In many kind of ways.

♥