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[onclevernapkins]

for a second I hoped the car would crash and we could die in pain

but as i tasted my salty tears I knew it wouldn't change a thing.

your beauty like a chainsaw, carving designs into my heart

and you're the only one I know who can turn pain into an art.

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[littlexpinky]

whenever I read poems, i wish i could go and ask the poet what it means because people assume it means one thing but it could very likely mean something very different. unfortunately, most of the poets i read from are dead. so, tori, what does this poem mean to you?
<3jax

[onclevernapkins]

most of my poems mean more than i can explain in real words...

thats why they are in that form, you know?

[onclevernapkins]

but it's about the pain and emptyness inside.
and the fear. and the beauty in the way it never goes away, the art in the way it repeats itself like a pattern.

or something.

[dirty_cereal]

that is so ...... awesome.

tori your writings are amazing.

[littlexpinky]

why in god's name to you have my little troy's picture as your icon. thats really funny. He acts like such a little flirt, do you talk to him alot? He's my good friend's younger brother.
<3jackie

[dirty_cereal]

troy is my best friend...my little doodie bear...(HAHA..doodie bear)
i lurrrve him.
and his older brother's pretty cool too idk he works in the school store. that's all i know him from.

[onclevernapkins]

thanks steph!

i love, and miss you