LJ Idol Week 5: "Building a Better Mousetrap"

[onda_bianca]

It was 2010 when I wore my heart on my sleeve and the man of my dreams blew his nose on it

Comments

[crimsonplum]

High-impact! So familiar, so understandable, a perfect slam for a door in your past. <3

[onda_bianca]

Thanks.

[reborn_spirit]

I really like the format of your entry.
Sucks about the guy though. :(

[onda_bianca]

Thanks.

It sucked a lot then. But the "time heals all" thing proved true in this case.

[kajel]

Nice job.

[onda_bianca]

Thanks

[grail76]

Very good. Nice use of the repeated phrase.

[onda_bianca]

Thanks:)

[roina_arwen]

It's hard to leave but sometimes you just gotta!

[onda_bianca]

Definitely.