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A New Perspective

Mar 22, 2010 19:32

Title: A New Perspective
Author: onecasillas
Pairing: Steven Gerrard / Xabi Alonso
Summary: Xabi's departure from Liverpool, the way it really happened.
Word Count: 1,896
A/N: This was supposed to be a happy fic, but I'm not sure if I achieved that, so… well, you've been warned.

( Steven sat on the sofa, his heart pounding as he nervously stared at the closed door, a million thoughts racing through his mind. )

fic: a new perspective, pairing: steven gerrard/xabi alonso

Comments 11

julialonso March 22 2010, 22:52:04 UTC

Oh...
I can't find words to express my feeling right now.
It's so hard to say anything about Xabi leaving :/
but it's beautiful though, it's SeX ♥

onecasillas March 23 2010, 21:01:41 UTC

Thanks :)

katiebooth1983 March 22 2010, 23:46:11 UTC

Stevie was so unselfish in this, knowing what was best for Xabi. *sighs*

onecasillas March 23 2010, 21:02:10 UTC

He was :/
Thanks for reading :)

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onecasillas March 23 2010, 21:03:11 UTC

That's exactly what I was going for, Stevie wanting to see Xabi happy.

Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it.

stevie23 March 23 2010, 08:29:30 UTC

that was a very powerful fic hun, very well written. It didn't make me sad at all, it was kind of happy tp see stevie letting him go, but also knowing that it wasn't the end of their love. Aww, lovely. XXX

onecasillas March 23 2010, 21:03:47 UTC

Thanks :) I'm really glad you liked it.

x_embrujada March 23 2010, 08:46:31 UTC

Happy fic? are you kidding? I am almost crying here!!!
But very realistic, unfortunately for them.
The whole story is keeping the emotions for final scene where Stevie was crying in his car. And that was fantastic!!!
My sobs and my thanks to you!!!

onecasillas March 23 2010, 21:04:28 UTC

Sorry :( I did try to make it a happy fic, hah.

I'm glad you still liked it, though :)