Fic: Discourse Due South - RayK/Fraser (NC17)

[estrella30]

Title: Discourse
Author: estrella30
Fandom: Due South
Pairing: RayK/Fraser
Rating: NC17

Thanks to: brooklinegirl for squeeing and amazing beta skills, as well as the title. To qe2 for being the best cheerleader ever and everyone in #discourse who've had to listen to me complain for 2 months how I haven't been able to write porn. This is also for lyra_sena who wanted comment porn

Comments

[jenboo]

*snuggles you*

Wow, this was great, sweetie! It's a fabulous day for RealGuy!Fraser! First Ces's story and now this! I love the 'give me the damn book' because Fraser *does* cuss and he *does* talk like a normal human being sometimes. When you get him loosened up, anyway. And how much looser do you get than giving your partner a blow job while you have your hand down your own pants? Thank you for *that* image! It'll be following me around all day, for gods sake!

You are a goddess! MWAH!

[estrella30]

I love the 'give me the damn book' because Fraser *does* cuss and he *does* talk like a normal human being sometimes

Yes! He really, really does!

And how much looser do you get than giving your partner a blow job while you have your hand down your own pants?

Yeah - not much looser than that *g*

Thanks, jen!

*snuggles you back*

[akite]

Hee! Fraser has a diary. (Journal!) I loved this, E.

[estrella30]

He DOES have a diary!!

*g*

Thanks, a! I appreciate it!

[burntcopper]

So, so good. This :flings arms wide: good. Yesirree.

[estrella30]

Yay!

Thank you *flings arms really wide* THIS much!

[tobyfan]

Ray dropped it on the floor like it was a hot coal.

Heee!!!!! I can so see him doing this.

(his dad? He was talking to his dad? Freak.)

Bwahahaha! This made me laugh out loud.

And never ever, even in Ray's most far-out fantasies, did he ever think he'd have Fraser here, on his knees, sucking Ray's cock and making these happy-sounding little groans, and Ray had to open his eyes and look, because he was half-convinced it was something he'd never get the chance to see again.

*guh*

And I love the ending. This was very adorable and very H-O-T!!

[estrella30]

Thank you, anne!

(his dad? He was talking to his dad? Freak.)

Bwahahaha! This made me laugh out loud.

LOL! Thank! I can just so see it happening.

"Actually, Ray, I was speaking to my father."
"Isn't he - you know - dead, Frase?"
"Well, yes."
"And you were talking to him."
"Err - yes."
*pause*
"Freak."
"Understood."

*g*

Thanks again!

woo-fuckin'-HOO.

[qe2]

::cheers the fine and lovely estrella30 on even more::

::pauses briefly to blow out dangerous panty fire::

::continues to cheer::

Must go to board meeting now and pretend to be all vanilla and calm and other stuff I am most definitely not. Which is, in case you missed it, your fault. More feedback later, when I'm coherent. (More coherent.)

::smooches you gratefully::

Re: woo-fuckin'-HOO.

[estrella30]

*blushes*

*blows on your panties*

*grins*

Heh.