Fic: Discourse Due South - RayK/Fraser (NC17)

[estrella30]

Title: Discourse
Author: estrella30
Fandom: Due South
Pairing: RayK/Fraser
Rating: NC17

Thanks to: brooklinegirl for squeeing and amazing beta skills, as well as the title. To qe2 for being the best cheerleader ever and everyone in #discourse who've had to listen to me complain for 2 months how I haven't been able to write porn. This is also for lyra_sena who wanted comment porn

Comments

[engenda]

I'm in fic heaven. Whew girl, you're good. So very, very good.

I knew from the moment he turned around that this man was not Ray Vecchio. For one thing, he was exuberant and blond, and made me feel more comfortable in ten seconds than Ray Vecchio did in nearly two years. For another, I don't think I've ever been this instantly attracted to anyone in all my life.

This hits so many, many buttons. Bless you.

*licks*

[estrella30]

Thank you!

This hits so many, many buttons. Bless you.

Glad I could be of service!

(And god - I suck! I just realized you sent me your story back., I'll work on it tonight - promise! Sorry!)

[ilexa]

Yeah, I'm really going to have to insist that you marry me now. Yeah, because I'll get a better job, and you can stay at home and raise the porn bunnies. Sound like a plan?

Cause that's about the hottest bestest fucking story I've read in quite some time.

*licks*

[estrella30]

Yeah, I'm really going to have to insist that you marry me now

Dude - no insisting necessary! You got it!

Yeah, because I'll get a better job, and you can stay at home and raise the porn bunnies. Sound like a plan?

Best. Plan. Ever.

Cause that's about the hottest bestest fucking story I've read in quite some time.

*smooches you hard*

Thank you very kindly, babe!

[lynnmonster]

Whoooo! (Of course, BLG was right, I *adore* this story.)

I particularly loved the uh-oh, all-is-not-right beginning, not to mention the wonderful diary/journal thing and the hot hot kitchen blowjob. And their dialogue is great -- go, you! Thanks so much for this one!

*hugs story tight*

[estrella30]

Whoooo! (Of course, BLG was right, I *adore* this story.)

yay! So glad!

I particularly loved the uh-oh, all-is-not-right beginning, not to mention the wonderful diary/journal thing and the hot hot kitchen blowjob

Ahh, my friend lynn. A woman with very simple pleasures in life. Good dialogue and a hit kitchen blowjob *g*

*saaaaaaaaaaaandwich*

[qe2]

Feedback styled in honor of brooklinegirl, who gives great comment.

To qe2 for being the best cheerleader ever

Real easy to cheer for a winning team, darlin'.

Ray shifted his weight to his other foot, and watched as Fraser cracked his neck and licked his lip and did about nine other things that usually indicate that Benton Fraser Is Not Having a Good Time.

::snerk:: How you manage to write funny and porny and guh and giggle in the same fic...so cool.

No one was going to bring up what they had talked about however many days ago (two days, the little voice in his head told him. You know exactly how many days ago it was, you big liar, and it was two days ago)

I love it when these guys can't manage to fool themselves, even when they can fool one another.

And Ray was up!

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAL!

Ahem.

(Well, he is about to score, after all.)

(kind of like he was now so, way to go, Ray! Ten Easy Ways To Make Your Best Friend Uncomfortable In Your Presence, coming right up!)

::re-snerk:: See above.

and when he said, "Read the damn book," real

[estrella30]

Yay! Thank you!

Feedback styled in honor of brooklinegirl, who gives great comment.

Heh. She gives good LOTS of stuff *g*

::snerk:: How you manage to write funny and porny and guh and giggle in the same fic...so cool.

lol! Love the idea of the guh and the giggle in the same fic

And Ray was up!

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAL!

LOL! This was pretty much *exactly* what was in my head as I was writing *g*

So glad you liked, and that the funny and the snark and the hotness all worked for you. You're way too good to me, but I definitely appreciate it!

*smooches*

[qe2]

Heh. She gives good LOTS of stuff *g*

*grumblefrickin’TEASEgrumble*

At least promise you’ll take some good pictures…

Love the idea of the guh and the giggle in the same fic

Dude, I think that’s an established trope in dS fic by now - and this story definitely qualifies.

::pauses to issue virtual props to lynnmonster for reminding her of how useful the word and concept of “trope” are::

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAL!

LOL! This was pretty much *exactly* what was in my head as I was writing *g*

…really? How scary is that? I love it!

You're way too good to me, but I definitely appreciate it!

Not true, not true. But hey, if you wanna overappreciate me, I’m not gonna complain.

::preens::

*smooches*

::resmooches::

[mergatrude]

most 'licious! So lovely with the angst and the hot and the teasing. And I can just imagine what sort of conversation Fraser was having with Bob out in the hall!!

[estrella30]

Thank you, sweetie!

Yes, I'm sure the conversation with Bob was a doozy *g*

Thanks for reading and commenting!