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Fic: Discourse Due South - RayK/Fraser (NC17)

Sep 28, 2004 12:54

Title: Discourse
Author: estrella30
Fandom: Due South
Pairing: RayK/Fraser
Rating: NC17

Thanks to: brooklinegirl for squeeing and amazing beta skills, as well as the title. To qe2 for being the best cheerleader ever and everyone in #discourse who've had to listen to me complain for 2 months how I haven't been able to write porn. This is also for lyra_sena who wanted comment porn ( Read more... )

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keldaryth October 1 2004, 06:58:27 UTC

Re: "Give me back the damn book." estrella30 October 1 2004, 07:06:17 UTC

Yay! Snarky Fraser seems to hit lots of peoples buttons *g*

Thanks so much, K! Glad you liked it and thanks for letting me know!

keldaryth October 1 2004, 08:33:31 UTC

celli October 8 2004, 21:17:05 UTC

loveloveloveloveFraserbeingaggressiveloveloveloveRaybeingavoidyLOVE!!

estrella30 October 10 2004, 12:21:25 UTC

thankyouthankyouthankyouyou'resowonderfulcelliandIappreciateyourcommentsYAY!

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estrella30 December 16 2004, 11:48:36 UTC

Hee!

*buys you new panties*

*wonders if that's wildly inappropriate since she just met you*

*buys them anyway*

Thanks so much! This was the story after a porn-blockage, so yay that the porn works for you!

Thanks again - your comments really made my day *g*

keerawa September 9 2006, 21:02:56 UTC

Hot, sweet, yet kind of spikey, just teh way I like these boys!

Great start with Ray listening to Fraser pace and talk to himself outside the door. I couldn't help but read between the lines, and imagine what a mind-numbingly bad two days Fraser just had, kicking himself for walking out on Ray and trying to find some way to make it right. I loved Ray bouncing off the couch to get a beer and avoid The Talk. And then, Fraser's gift of himself, in forcing Ray to read his journal, was just perfect. "Read the damn book."

Then there was the incredibly hot sex, of which I must must must mention this sentence: Fraser's head was moving slowly, back and forth, and then, as if he knew he was being watched, Fraser took his other hand and slid it down his stomach, popping the button on his own jeans and sliding his hand down into his starched, white boxers.

*fans self*

estrella30 September 10 2006, 14:52:10 UTC

oh, thank you so much!! and yeah. sometimes fraser can be really nnnnnnnnnnnngh. *g*

thank you again!!

inksheddings May 14 2010, 02:28:51 UTC

This was a delightful read. :D