A Poem Called "X"

May 14, 2007 22:20

This is the third time since last Fall that I've posted poetry on here, but it's the only form of creative writing I can pull out right now. There are a lot of times that I'd love to begin carving a play or a longer story out of the side of a mountain, but there really isn't the time or the energy right now. So I'm doing more poetry. I wrote this ( Read more... )

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velocicox May 15 2007, 07:13:45 UTC
i like it...

do the windless kites burn when they hit the ground? that would certainly tie in your previous entry.

chin-up noahdavid... good things come to those who wait

or is it, God has a plan for you, you just can't see it right now...

o maybe it's, tell them hoes your better than their cracked out ways!

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princess6abby May 15 2007, 21:20:29 UTC
i like that the first line is "your booty"

as always, noahDavid, i enjoy your writing.

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hollilloh May 16 2007, 17:50:41 UTC
I really like this one. great rythym and imagery.
your last one was interesting too---it had an engaging texture to it.

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