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onexeightxsevin

blah

Jul 06, 2004 23:23

As i lay here.. living in the past. gazing at the sun.. watchin it beam unto the grass. I still hear you voice, so gentle so soft, slowly the sun goes down, and your silence kills me ( Read more... )

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from britt anonymous July 7 2004, 04:08:40 UTC

i like it. it flows well. heartache but soft and not angry. like you see the hurt but you are content to let it be. very nice keep up the good stuff dude.

Re: from britt onexeightxsevin July 7 2004, 04:12:04 UTC

hey britt, we gotta hang out soon man.. thanks for the love, you always understood all my problems. hang out, positive :)

this is great anonymous July 7 2004, 04:18:32 UTC

hEy omg juSTin were do u come up w/ all these like poems..i mean u have like a great mind i like wish that my mind was as good as yours. i mean like ur so awsome..and like this is another really great poem of yours. YoO have great talent.lol!
LoVe ((:bRiTtY:))

Re: this is great onexeightxsevin July 7 2004, 04:20:00 UTC

hah brittany.. you said like about 10 times there. hah, you're so funny. you gotta come back to lake jackson soon. <33

ur frikin poem!!!!! anonymous July 7 2004, 04:24:51 UTC

dude . . . ur poem is awesome!!! and awww so sweet . . . just wondering who u were thinkin bout when u wrote that . . . its soo sweet~ RaCh

Re: ur frikin poem!!!!! onexeightxsevin July 7 2004, 04:28:02 UTC

aww :) its more like a song, you'll hear it someday i'm sure.. maybe when you come visit

lire_ceci July 7 2004, 04:27:28 UTC

<3_sigh. one day romeo. one day,

_alex

onexeightxsevin July 7 2004, 04:29:17 UTC

you know me, always on the search for my true love. its a neverending journey

heroinamanda July 7 2004, 04:44:20 UTC

that's so pretty!! i usually hate reading people's poems because they use all kinds of big words that don't always work because it sounds more complicated, like using them means they're very intelligent or something i dunno. and i usually can't relate to what people write but you're poem is simple and very vERy pretty.

hah onexeightxsevin July 7 2004, 04:46:57 UTC

hah, well normally my poems are very complex as well, but this is a song and i don't like singing complex words, its too hard to sing, memorize big words and play guitar at the same time.

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strandedmemory July 7 2004, 15:20:53 UTC

its beautiful justin, I love it!

[sheryl]

ps: stop saying you're horrible at writing..deep down you know you arent

kthnxbye..:)

hah onexeightxsevin July 7 2004, 17:11:51 UTC

hah.. you're so sweet.. thnx sheryl.. you rawk my socks off :)

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