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[FOR EVERYONE] I THINK YOU COULD SAVE MY LIFE (2/2)

Oct 15, 2014 11:54

( Yixing can only see the way Lu Han moves his lips to follow the lines, the way his pointed nose turns slightly red, his red hair that falls perfectly at the top of his eyebrows, his hands that move along to the rhythms, and all the twists and muscles of his face, his bones, and skin. )

!round 2014

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soft_daisy October 24 2014, 17:28:34 UTC

The whole back story with the family was a really nice touch and heartwarming, with Yixing's mom making time to call him everyday even if her calls get rejected and his parents welcoming him back with open arms despite everything ;~; Luhan and Yixing's interactions <3 I love how you wrote their banter and teasing, and all of this story was fun and enjoyable to read. The friendship from Chanyeol, Junmyeon and even Kyungsoo was also enviable ^^ Thank you for writing and sharing with us!