Did I just write something?

Sep 13, 2010 18:32

I've just written my first fic (and first anything, really) since last March! Oh my gosh! Big thanks to hpgw_drabbles for inspiring me with this month's prompt: Platform 9 and 3/4Title: September 1, 2023 ( Read more... )

second gen, fic, h/g

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dukebrymin September 13 2010, 22:47:34 UTC
Very good capture of the chaos!

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only_for_one September 13 2010, 22:52:10 UTC
Thanks!

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aggiebell90 September 13 2010, 22:56:32 UTC
:) This is very fun! The dialogue really allowed me to picture the chaos (Of course, the fact that we have 4 kids and this is what our house is like every morning helped, too!!) I especially like the bit about the map. Because you know Harry tried to sneak it to James...and you know Ginny knew all about it, too!

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only_for_one September 13 2010, 23:00:21 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the dialogue helped you picture it, along with life experience. =) (Go you with four kids, by the way!) And of course Ginny knew about it...she's a mom!

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crumplehornedki September 14 2010, 03:27:23 UTC
lol - sounds like my house every morning!

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only_for_one September 14 2010, 23:09:12 UTC
Ha! Thanks for reading!

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racing_rain September 14 2010, 03:48:51 UTC
Really nice! The dialogues totally captured the chaos as well as personality of the Potter family members. :D

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only_for_one September 14 2010, 23:11:13 UTC
Thanks!! I'm glad you think so, I was nervous all the dialogue wouldn't make sense. =)

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almond_joyz September 14 2010, 04:23:35 UTC
How lovely! I like the ending, particularly since I just wrote about them adding a fourth!!

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only_for_one September 14 2010, 23:13:32 UTC
Thanks! I'm heading over to read yours now...I've been so busy lately, I'm completely backed up on my fic reading! =)

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