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6th Soul. Action
[Here's Lute, passed out in a field, just outside the village, quite exhausted, with numerous wounds hidden away under his clothes. He might be a little hard to wake, but it's worth a shot.] -
5th Soul. Action
[Lute is sitting in the grass at the east end of the village, amusing himself by blowing bubbles with soap and a makeshift wand. After reading that Sasarai had passed, he's keeping his spirits up with nostalgia. Blowing soap bubbles is something he hasn't had the chance to do in fifteen years. He can't help but feel at peace by it.] -
4th Soul. Voice
Has anyone seen my sister?
I found the prettiest dress to give her! I think it really suits her!
Flute? Fluuuute?
Huh, I wonder, did she go for a walk and get lost? Maybe I should summon something to track her down!
Hm... but what spell... what spell... hmm... -
3rd Soul. Written
So this is an experiment? How awful! How can they do such things to everyone? Though... I have to admit, their magic is astounding!
I will look for spells to counteract this right away! I hope I find something useful. I'm still myself, so I should help all that I can. I guess I'll be spending my time in the library this week! -
2nd Soul. Voice
Wow, that thing's amazing. I've never seen a creature so big! It's bigger than Drum! Are aliens a kind of demon?
Do these things happen often here? It will be an interesting place to stay, if they do! -
1st Soul. Accidental Voice
Mmn... [A yawn then a startled gasp.]
Wow... so pretty...! Mother! Heaven's beautiful, Mother!
Hm? Mother? Where are you?
[He laughs.] Hello there! I didn't expect to see animals here, but I'm not very surprised! Have you seen my mother, anywhere? She should be here, close by.
Hello to you, too!
[He's bubbling with laughter, accompanied by ( Read more... )