Selling His Six Year-Old Logic

[openedlocket]

AN: Here's my not so comedic, comedy for the mini contest. My word was 'selling' which can mean  'to exchange something of value for something else', which is what sort of happens here. Enjoy! :)

Comments

[openedlocket]

Corrected it ;)

Thanks :D And don't worry, I didn't see it that way at all. My mind probably skipped over that when I was editing. Thank you for pointing it out.

[pipisafoat]

Hahaha! It's like two pennies is worth more than a dime because there are two of them. I wish that logic still worked. I have a lot of pennies. Very cute!

[openedlocket]

The world would be so much simpler if everything worked that way, wouldn't it? Gives us a reason to get rid of all those coins too. =)) Glad you liked it.

[xalter_egox]

You did a really good job on this, dear! :) I was anticipating your original plot for the topic you'd chosen, but this is lovely~
Poor Mattie, but I like how Sam outsmarted him. ;)
Keep writing! You're amazing at it. :D

[openedlocket]

Thanks...oh,hey. Do you know how close I got to naming Sam 'Alfred'? =)) I'm just glad I found another name to work with. I couldn't finish the original concept I had on time, but I think I'm happy with this too :)) I'm glad you like it.

>:D< Thaaaaank you.

[missflyer]

Aw, that's so cute how Sam outwits Matthew. I feel kind of bad for Matthew -- but at least two Jolly Ranchers last longer than one little bag of Skittles! >:D

Edit :)

[missflyer]

Hi openedlocket, I'm your editor for this week

Re: Edit :)

[openedlocket]

Glad you like it ;) Kids are especially crafty like that. I know from my slightly insane siblings...

Your suggestion makes that line work so much better. It does express the action pretty well. I changed the sentence as you suggest.

Thank you for the edit. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D