Comments | openpockets: green [oneshot]

salted_taiyaki in openpockets

Oct 17, 2010 17:05

Title: green
Author: salted_taiyaki
Pairing(s): girl!Onew x girl!Taemin
Genre: Romance, Angst, AU
Rating: PG
Word Count: 715
Summary: taeyeon is a good friend.

a/n: inspired by this comic by w.o.m. a slightly different take. i just found it to be so sweet and sad.

( taeyeon spreads out the small blanket, opens up the lunch box wrapped in her mom's (and incidentally eunsook's) favorite handkerchief, and waits on the rooftop quietly. )

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salted_taiyaki October 20 2010, 00:08:45 UTC

thank you ♥

honeyflavor October 17 2010, 21:57:15 UTC

Aw, so beautifully written. ♥

salted_taiyaki October 20 2010, 00:09:00 UTC

thank you very much! ♥

g_odalisque13 October 17 2010, 22:11:26 UTC

this was just beautiful.
sad, but beautiful. but a little hopeful too.
i hope you write more of girl!OnTae b/c you write them so well!

salted_taiyaki October 20 2010, 00:09:25 UTC

oh thank you so much hahaha yes, a little bit hopeful! just a tad
i'll try ♥

hikaritsubasa October 18 2010, 00:36:11 UTC

love it...
you should write a squeal...

salted_taiyaki October 20 2010, 00:09:44 UTC

thank you ♥ haha i'll have to think about that

mouthings October 18 2010, 01:30:03 UTC

i've never read shinee as girls.
/needs to watch that one show...

but this was subtly sad. i enjoyed it. :)

salted_taiyaki October 20 2010, 00:10:07 UTC

ahaha really now? you definitely should :)

thank you! i'm glad you did :)