Disney Laced Profanity: Chapter Five (Rachel/Puck)

[ophelia1234]

Thanks SO much for all of the comments. You guys make writing so much fun.

Chapter Five

Comments

[kalamac]

I've really been enjoying this story. Keep up the good writing,

[ophelia1234]

Thank you so much!

[psychme]

Been reading and reviewing on FF.net, but thought I'd mix it up a bit today.

I was pleasantly surprised to find an alert for this story in my inbox. If this kind of speed is what reviews bring about, well, I hope they pour in, as your fic deserves.

If I were to quote everything I loved about this chapter, I would end up quoting this entire chapter. No joke. But this was my favorite part of the whole thing:

She turns to meet Mercedes’ stare as if she doesn’t already fucking know what everyone wants to ask. (He hates to admit it, but shit like that make Puck kind of proud of her.)

And I can't not mention Puck's "I don't care" sign, the way his brain translates Rachelspeak and his own surprise when he alerted Rachel to his presence in the bathroom. Hee. Brilliant.

This chapter was just top-notch. Can't wait for more.

[ophelia1234]

Thanks for the super fun comments! I love it when people are specific :-)

And while I admit that being a review junkie does speed me up, in this case having a day off of work with no other plans also helped! LOL

[cailet_06]

Great update, I can't wait to see what else you got! I love your Puck speak. Sometimes authors have a habit of making him to soft, but you do a great job of keeping him like Puck.

[ophelia1234]

Thanks!

I really try to walk that line with Puck. I'm in the middle of rewatching the season on DVD and have been kind of surprised to see just how much Puck really does show both sides just depending on the situation. (He seems to be his most vulnerable with women, interestingly enough)

[burntotears]

Fantastic, as always. Perfect and wonderful and hilarious, as usual. Amazing, interesting and intriguing too, of course.

<33333

Nothing to say but keep going because you rock.

[ophelia1234]

Aw, shucks! :-)

Thanks. You are too sweet.

(Also? Love your new pic!)

[burntotears]

All true and all very much deserved! :D

(Oh which pic? The cowboy one? Its so cute, right?)

[ophelia1234]

Yup, that's the one! :-)

[anonymous]

Oh, this is great! I'm imagining the collective look on the glee club faces if Rachel walks in in Puck's shirt.

[ophelia1234]

That would be entertaining, wouldn't it? :-)

(And YAY for anonymous reviews! LOL)