Smosh Fic: What It Was Before (Chapter 4)

[orangefriday]

Title: What It Was Before (Chapter 4)
Ratng: NC-17 ish
Pairings: Ian/Anthony, Anthony/OC
Genre/Warnings: Angst, OOC, Drama
Summary: Ian comes out of a coma caused by a car accident to find himself feeling like a stranger in his own life. Anthony struggles with the idea that his best friend had almost died
Chapter Summary: Remembering and acknowleding

Comments

[orangefriday]

LOL @ eyeballs. I'll give you new ones if you want. ;D

Thanks! I made a whole bunch of Smosh icons and I'll share them with you guys when I'm finished.

And THANKS FOR READING :):)

[firetruckyouxx]

D; I seriously just want to go in this story and slap Anthony for being for blind, nurse Ian back to him normal self with my magical powers and make them kiss each other!

And does Makayla need to paint Anthony a freaking picture?!? Obviously Ian is in love with you and you're in love with him.

...I was facepalming this entire chapter and now my forehead has a red mark in the shade of my hand...

;) Can't wait to read moarrrrr :D

[orangefriday]

Omg, I just had this image of just exactly what kind of picture Makayla could paint. If ya know what a mean *wink*

Hope your forehead heals. Thanks for reading!! :)

[smoshluv]

I love it! I know you're asking for con crit but it's already so good, I honestly can't find anything! XD
Nehhh, hoping the next chapter comes sooooon...lol someone in school today was getting to know me and pointed to my notebook and asked what was with all the doodles..I had covered the entire page with hearts, the word ianthony, and scenes from dif. chapters of this story XD
(I slammed it shut and claimed i was normalXDD)
Well, anywhooo, LOVED IT! (:<3

[orangefriday]

OMG I wanna see your doodles! And psh, who needs to be normal? Normal is weird, in my opinion.

Hope your day at school went fantastic!! I guess we do things a little differently here, but school usually starts for me after Labour Day. So I'm little surprised you started already.

Thanks for reading!!

[smoshluv]

Haha I shall post a picture sooon(: And it was okay, my school could be a lot better but school's school. And yeah it's really weird that we have two days then a long weekend with monday off XD

[smoshyluver]

LOL "claimed I was normal"
and btw, you should post some of your doodles :3

[boredomdelux]

my donkey is river waffle big sausage fat. Seriously. that's how I feel after reading this. It's a compliment, by the way ^__

[orangefriday]

Aww *blushes*
I'm glad it's believable enough. I was scared this whole thing would go down the road of complete OOC disaster.
Oh, I absolutely LOVE your reaction for the M/A scene.
Thank you so much for reading!
And TOBY! Love him!!

[boredomdelux]

IKR? He's the only one able to make me watch hours upon hours of Amnesia (holy hell that was scary as FUCK), LA Noire and Terraria playthroughs.

And yeah, the M/A scene seriously made me squint and growl at my computer, haha! And "OOC-disaster" made me laugh XD Don't worry, that hurricane hasn't hit yet! :D

[sydney_amber]

AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
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i died. cuz the chapter is over x_x *chants* moremoremore!!
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okay, slightly kidding there(: writing is hard...so just...go as fast as you can...? :D

[orangefriday]

Oh geez, yes, writing is hard. I recall bashing my head into the keyboard whenever I couldn't spit something out right or what I just wrote was hella stupid. :P

Thanks so much for reading :) I'll be finishing off the next chapter tonight and editing it. I take like a week to actually like it and feel like it's good enough.