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Smosh Fic: It's Okay

Mar 11, 2012 05:25

Title: It's Okay
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Ian/Anthony
Genre/Warnings: Angst, Alcohol-Use, One-Shot
Summary: Anthony can't let himself go... not anymore.
Author's Notes: This story had a mind of its own. It wasn't supposed to be angst... I had it all planned out - wrote the ending to a potentially non-angst fic and then bam! Angst took over. Thank you so ( Read more... )

smosh, one-shot, fanfiction, slash

Comments 24

mutual_death March 12 2012, 01:05:21 UTC

Nothing wrong with being alone, Anthony. I'll fill your void!! ;)

This story was so frickin good, I didn't even realize it was over. and when I did, I let out an audible "aww no" to myself. The descriptions were so real, I swear I'm drunk now from just reading it.

This is definitely helping class up the comm. Please write more. Or I'll have to beg and that's just sad.

orangefriday March 12 2012, 02:40:11 UTC

I found out I like writing about them being drunk. People do/think funny things when they are.

Thanks for reading! And I'd like to see you beg. >:)

raeofthestage March 12 2012, 01:50:55 UTC

wow... this is really good!!! I loved it soo much!! I feel hurt and slightly buzzed.....

orangefriday March 12 2012, 02:37:42 UTC

Oh no, I hope you don't feel hurt for long :P Go read some happy Ianthony fics!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting :)

michaelangelo24 March 13 2012, 00:08:21 UTC

Let's see how much constructive criticism I can give ( ... )

orangefriday March 13 2012, 00:32:21 UTC

I did have Anthony's name in the first paragraph at first and then I thought I would keep going with the mysterious tone of the opening (and Sanjay told me too. >:) hawhaw)

I completely agree with your suggestion about the name calling.

And derp, when I wrote the teetering part, I actually had Ian and Anthony reversed. Off to fix that!

HAH! I was afraid people might be disappointed that there was no kiss but it looks like everybody is in favour of not kissing a vomit-mouth. :)

Thanks for the awesome critique!!! I need more of this. It's like a drug!!!

michaelangelo24 March 13 2012, 01:08:43 UTC

Well not mentioning a name did work at creating a mysterious tone.

Lol, vomit is too gross to kiss someone after throwing up. D:

Don't go sending me stories all the time. I can only edit so many. :P

vespiquen8 March 14 2012, 22:04:02 UTC

Hello. Yay! I'm actually commenting after you kept bugging me. :P

I love reading angst, something about it is just so fun to read. So naturally, I really loved reading yours. :) Meh, I don't care that they don't actually kiss, that's what angst is. :P

orangefriday March 14 2012, 22:05:37 UTC

Angst FTW! I find angst unpredictable with very appealing outcomes. >:)

freshdumbledore March 30 2012, 11:33:49 UTC

You seem to like writing angst lately, don't you? Well, since you are very good at it, I don't complain.
I think the most beautiful part of your stories is the mood, you can almost feel what the characters feel/think. It's amazing how many fanfiction authors there are who can write better stories than actual authors who make money with their books. You know that whenever you release a book, I'll buy ten, so keep up with your amazing work!
Seriously, after reading two of your stories I actually noticed how much I missed your fics or the community in general...