Smosh Fic: Distraction

[orangefriday]

Title: Distraction
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Ian/Anthony, Ian/Melanie, Anthony/Kristen (Kalel)
Genre/Warnings: Angst, Smut, One-Shot
Summary: "He needs to know if he'll be alone again, to notice everything, without Ian as a distraction. (He needs to know if Melanie will be Ian's distraction today.)"
Author's Notes: Inspired by the amazing ivyblossom and her BBC

Comments

[orangefriday]

(LOL my layout like fucked up your user pic and I can't stop laughing. HAHAH!)

For me, I love love love love love love when people tell me their opinions about my writing, what to change, how to better it and what they feel about the piece overall. Totally, never, ever offended and never enough sometimes! So you could mark up this whole story and I'd be super happy. It provides me with a new perception of the piece and I can check if it's the right perspective/perception I want the reader to have

[lazah]

There are no words to describe how beautiful I found this, so I just leave it with this.
So with this you still have the knowledge I loved it. Too much to describe.
(I always love fluffy endings, but I'm addicted to your angst o.o)
If one day, I would become such a great writer as you are, I'll be blessed.
Amen.

[orangefriday]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! *hugs* Thank you for letting me know you liked it and gosh! What a compliment! >_< You're so sweet!

[freshdumbledore]

Uhm no? You can't leave me hanging like this! Not since this is my first ianthony fic since...almost 2 months? Probably...
Wow, just wow, after reading so much brilliant Johnlock lately, my slash standards got pretty high but of course you topped my expectations.
I love the mood that builds itself up during the whole story, kind of depressing but also...realistic(how fitting that in the middle of reading this, it started raining :D). I think the reality of this scenario is the main point why I love this, Ian and Anthony are perfectly in character instead of two lovesick puppies and while the end is pretty sad there is also a lot of space for hope that our boys could get together eventually.
Anyway, enough of my rambling, this story is wonderful and I think I might check out your old ones now...
(P.S. I absolutely adore your Benedict icon :))

[orangefriday]

You're back!!!!!! *cries like a bitch and holds on to your leg* (That's how I imagine John will be like once Sherlock shows his damned face. Plus a good punch, but I won't punch you... Maybe LOL)

Yes! So glad you read this and understood the realism of the whole fic. *hugs again*

I've been reading a lot of Johnlock too! And I think it's helping with my writing (and also intimidating me because they're all so fantastic!). Any amazing ones you've read lately that you can share?

Anyway, gee, I'm so happy to see you on LJ again (I see you on Tumblr and I bet you see me too with all the excessive Sherlock reblogging that I do. Ha!).

[links_journal]

amazing as always! but you need to write more! i haven't had new smosh fanfic's in ages D;

[orangefriday]

Thank you! There's always new fan fics being written over at the Ianthony community!

[jenna_lovesyou]

beautifully written! i absolutely love the dialogue between anthony and melanie. always nice to see the girls in smosh fic, too, even if it's predominantly ianthony. =)

[orangefriday]

Aw, thank you! I like having Mel appear in Smosh fics too :)