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The Flying Dutchman, 2/15

Nov 02, 2008 11:12

Title: The Flying Dutchman, 2/15
Rating: PG-13 (this chapter, for slash)
Wordcount: 2,360 (this chapter)
Disclaimer: Not mine, not true. Woe.
Summary: Dirk adjusts to life on board the Dutchman and discovers something he really would have preferred not knowing.

Intro post for this fic here.
( Chapter Two )

%giovanni van bronckhorst, *series: the flying dutchman, %dirk kuyt, %marco van basten, %ruud van nistelrooy, %edwin van der sar, %whole team

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yay pirates! austengirl November 2 2008, 18:01:59 UTC

Part 2 at last, huzzah! :D

As with Part 1, I enjoyed very much. Look forward to the next installment, whenever it comes along.

Re: yay pirates! aka_centimetre2 November 2 2008, 19:08:39 UTC

Huzzah for my brain finally snapping to orders, oy. :P Thanks, love, and I hope the next one will come quicker...

sonnenbluemchen November 2 2008, 18:56:02 UTC

Hai honey :)
That was just adorable and totally worth waiting for. The imagination of Dirks face when he sees Edwin and Ruud standing there making out, let alone Gios face when Dirks stutters that he'd seen them.
I'd love to have ink for printing out but I will do this tomorrow evening and then read it again with coffee. Enjoying it.
And re-reading until the next, whenever it comes. The main thing is, that it comes.
Have a nice evening
xx

aka_centimetre2 November 2 2008, 19:07:50 UTC

Yay, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, hon!! Sorry again that it took so long. And I like the image of Dirk's face too. Poor, confused Dirk. *pets him* :D

sonnenbluemchen November 2 2008, 19:19:24 UTC

I know that it sometimes takes time to return to a special story (tell that the girl who had sometimes 8 stories running = me) but - as for me - I always try to and now am glad you did to.

aka_centimetre2 November 2 2008, 23:53:57 UTC

...wow, I don't think I've ever had 8 stories going on at once. Though at the moment, I'm up to *counts* at least five, eep. Ah well. Thanks for your patience, anyway! :)

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dieuepargne November 2 2008, 21:44:39 UTC

AHHHHHHHHHH.

Oh, Dirk. So innocent and oh but it's a sin. No, bb. *pets Dirk* Oh, you. Honestly. How much do I want to spazz out on this again?

You're always talking about having to finish this damn thing, and I'm always hearing you write anything else but this chapter. Because, remember Caroline, to get to bloody chapter 10 YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE OTHERS FIRST. >:|

So there.

Klaas-Jan Huntelaar (the teen always insisted on being called by his full name)

♥

ILU. :D

...and ohoh. JAN VENNEGOOR GETTING BEATEN UP. *pokes*

aka_centimetre2 November 3 2008, 00:21:17 UTC

I solemnly swear I will try to write in chronological order this time! Hear that, brain? ILU2 BABES. And of course Jan Vennegoor gets beaten up. He's Jan Vennegoor. XD

speak_me_fair November 20 2008, 01:32:49 UTC

I had a long, interesting comment, so of course LJ took it and ate it and called it George. Basically, I love Gio and Dirk. *L* I'm predictable!