Comments | orchidluv: Nothing the Same, Book 4, Ch. 35

orchidluv

Nothing the Same, Book 4, Ch. 35

Mar 28, 2010 22:05

Nothing the Same, Book 4
Chapter: 35/40-ish
Feedback & concrit: yes, please
Disclaimer: don't own them, never will, just having fun.
Previous parts here

( Chapter 35 )

s/x, nts book 4

Comments 16

mulder200 March 29 2010, 05:28:33 UTC

Well, you certainly take care of the Knights but then we knew there were doomed anyway.

Poor Tara. It must suck to watch someone you love go through this. Desperate times call for desperate measures.

And the ending with Spike and Xander in the sun? Perfect!

orchidluv March 30 2010, 02:16:47 UTC

I felt kinda bad killing them off that way, but I think they annoyed Glory - she didn't have to kill them all on her way out of the abandoned gas station, but she did. So, I made her a little proactive here.

Glad you liked it, I really felt we needed to see that moment when Spike got to stand in the sun again.

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Re: ^_^ orchidluv March 30 2010, 02:17:51 UTC

Given some of the demon connections in town, it seemed inevitable that some of them would know about the ring being buried under their feet. *g*

dalefarwalker March 29 2010, 19:18:21 UTC

Thanks for sparing us that stupid run for no where in particular.

Another good chapter - can't wait to see what happens next

orchidluv March 30 2010, 02:19:43 UTC

I put the whole Winnebago fiasco down to someone really wanting to have a fight scene with the Knights and their horses. The whole thing struck me as someone really needing to say: "Are you crazy?" to Buffy. Which Xander and Spike took care of here.

oneofaradia March 30 2010, 17:05:27 UTC

I finally had a chance to get caught up, and what a wonderful three chapters. Poor Tara, but I love how she's willing to consider getting her hands dirty if it will help Willow.

Spike has the ring! *does happy Snoopy dance* Watch out Glory, here comes Spike!

Oh and I loved the final scene with Xander and Spike in the sun, *happy sigh*.

orchidluv March 31 2010, 07:37:01 UTC

Tara will do pretty much anything for Willow. *pets her* Spike is going to have fun mixing it up with Glory, it's really been frustrating for him, not being able to fight her.

skargasm April 7 2010, 00:33:59 UTC

Spike and Xander in the sun - absolutely perfect!!

And I did have a giggle at 'nutjob with impulse control problem' - yeah, can't think of anyone that matches that description apart from Glory *giggle*

orchidluv April 12 2010, 04:35:09 UTC

Really had to take a few minutes out from the drama to have a moment or two of pure happiness. Glad you liked.