My latest short story.

[oriann]

So, after a riveting conversation with Whistler, I was inspired to write and write I did. After a brief 5 hours, the following short story is what I had come up with. Although I doubt anyone reading this will have a problem with it, I feel that I should mention it contains adult language and graphic violence. For those of you who aren't offended

Comments

From you, Matt? I want NOTHING!!

[oriann]

Kidding, of course. Constructive criticism would be super as long as it has nothing to do with spelling. I didn't spellcheck this before posting :P

In addition to criticism, constructive or otherwise, a general opinion of how you liked it would be nice as well.